OUR YOUNG FUNNY VOICES
So far so good, the story has been amazing. I really haven't read lgbt stories but, yours made me quite interested in the genre. You helped us to see through the eyes of a lady who prefers women to men and, that's not something we see every day.
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The plot of the story has been so far, quite incredible. Although, i haven't read much of the story, I'm sure that with determination, you'll have the perfect plot.
Your writing styles are quite OK, only that i kinda felt run-on at some parts of the story but for an average, it's quite ok.
Your technical skills are amazing as, i haven't come onto any errors. You've got an amazing talent to write so, keep the fire of passion burning in your heart and, never relent in your determination. Your hardworking will pay off soon Sophie. I loved Our young funny voices and, I'll check back often.