Leslie H.

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6 to 18

So when I decided to check out this book I was expecting a nice romance with a plot twist which is what I got in this book ^^
One thing that didn't satisfy me was the fact that this book was short and basically took all of my excitement away for the reader to get more engaged in a book it needs to be more than four chapters long.
The plot is interesting the bad thing is that the author made the book too short.
In my opinion, I believe the author could've added more chapters to engage the reader and then in the last chapter give that plot twist.
Overall the story itself was great I liked it.

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Mortis

Amazing Im lost at words in this book it may not be complete yet but it's so good!
If I say so myself I personally love romance books more than horror books but every time I read one of HorrorMaster's books I can't help but love his horror books. I believe if he were a paid author he would be paid very well for how he writes and how he can make a reader get chills just by reading the summary.
Some authors like me can't find ways to attract readers toward them it's hard to get the reader's attention especially if you want to get noticed more than anything.
Let's just say HorrorMaster is the god at horror books that's why I admire his writing style and ability to write very well.
Dude keep writing you're very good at it!
Best of luck and keep me updated with your works!

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Brave

I have to admit that this is one of the most saddest and the most adorable book I've read!
I've never read a book from a dog's point of view I'm pretty sure that all dogs act like Brave we must remember that our dogs love us and will done anything to protect their owners.
This was a very sweet story I loved it I really did.
#BestPOVEver!
Continue writing more books author! this book reminded me that I must care more for my dogs and continue to take good care of them because someday they will leave this world but they will always remain in my heart.
Thank you for reminding me what love really is.
Best of luck to you with your writing!

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Not Like Me

Author omg!! HOW IS THIS BOOK NOT ON THE FRONT PAGE OF INKITT?!!
this book should be published and be one of the books teens should read.
HOW DOES THIS BOOK NOT HAVE ATLEAST A THOUSAND REVIEWS?!!
I loved the plot and the characters especially Ashley she reminds me in the end of the story that I have to be myself and not change at all for any guy.
I did find it annoying and frustrating that Ashley didn't know who to be with she kept switching from Zander to Aiden and I wanted to jump inside this book and grab her and say "Girl just choose already!"
I'm glad Ashley and Leslie made up and became friends I'm so thankful Aiden beat the heck out of Zander who was such a idiot to Ashley for lying to her.
Brittany was a interesting character for her personality and I adored Steph she reminded me of one of my best friends who acts like her.
I'm proud to be the first review of this book and I have the pleasure to say this is my top favorite of all the romance books I've read here.
I'm excited for more of your work.
Good luck!
-Leslie H.

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So talented

I need more updates I was amazed just by reading the first chapter!
Well done author I can't wait to see what more will be in this book.
Overall continue writing and keep being you!
Keep me updated!
Best of luck!
P.S if you could review my books too I would love that!
Btw you rock!
-Leslie H.

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Needs work

To start off the book is okay but it could be so much better first you have a lot of grammar errors and I sometimes cant understand what the characters are saying I know you can fix these mistakes! Best of luck in the future
Best Regards
-Leslie H.

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Beautiful and Sweet

I really love your poems they are so full of love in them I can feel it! I can also see you worked hard on them!
I always enjoy reading a good poetry book and yours was worth reading and writing this review. Definitely a five-star rating!
Keep writing don't give up!
Good job I enjoyed and loved every poem
I can't wait to see what more work you have to show off!
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Admiring

The plot is well written I admire your work!
Good job on writing the suspicion and mystery I couldn't stop reading ^^
More updates please this book is super good I loved it!
Keep being amazing and be yourself!
I can't wait to see what the future brings to you my friend!
Best Regards
-Leslie H.

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Interesting!

Im already into the story where's the rest though?
I want to know what happens next!
Continue writing I love a good mystery book!
Your cover really looks good I wonder where you got it from?
Amazing first chapter though.
Keep up the good work!

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Exciting

I can't wait to read more chapters!
A zombie virus? ooh, that's better than COVID honestly!
Amazing and don't worry about the swearing not everyone is the same.
Im already picturing what might happen next I do enjoy reading a good thriller book!
Nice job !
Keep being awesome and continue writing ^^
Best regards my friend!
-Leslie H,

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Psychic

WOW!
I adored this book you wrote it so perfectly well!
I couldn't stop reading and reading I was so hooked!
I was like I need to continue reading or else I will regret it
You both have an amazing talent!
This is officially my number one favorite book.
Thank you so much for your reviews on my two books but I would love to hear from you two on my series ones.
Magnificent book well-written plot deserves a 5-star rating.
I was left speechless at your cliffhangers.
Loved this book so much thank you for making me read it!
-Leslie H.

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Awesome my friend!

I really love your books man!
You are so good at it I can't wait more from you
You have a good talent don't waste it!
I got your back always ^^
5 star review you earn it!
-Leslie H.

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It's good

Pretty nice start I like it.
You should keep updating more this story is captivating.
Well Done ForestJingle!
You have good skills!
-Leslie H.

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His Love

I enjoyed reading your story not bad for a beginner in writing.
Trust me I was there once ;)
The story could've been longer you know?
But it's alright I still loved it!
Good writing skills I loved your characters!
Hope this review helped I can't wait to hear more from you on your books and on my books ^^
-Leslie H.

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Wow!

To be able to express and put your emotions in poems is amazing.
I'm not that good while writing poems honestly haha.
I loved every poem I could tell you put your heart in there!
Cherish your talent for writing!
No mistakes no grammar errors well done!
5-star rating for sure!
-Leslie H.

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It's a great Start!

I like it keep writing I can't wait for more from you sweetie!
Interesting plot you got there It caught me in shock!
Love it so far can't wait for more updates!
Hope this review helped!
-Leslie H.

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Murder Mystery

It's good and has a ton of potential you should update this more often!
Loved your work and plot!
You earn my 5 star review and so much more!
Hope this review helped
-Leslie H.

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Well Done!

I loved it the book is amazing!
I loved the characters and the setting how you pictured it very well detailed i enjoyed it.
I want to keep getting updates of this book!
You nailed it author
Keep being awesome and have a great day.
Continue writing don't let other's stop you!

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5 stars this book deserves it!

I love the characters and how well detailed the author made them.
I love the suspense awaiting!
The author has good talent and you should continue to write.
I don't see anything to change here just be yourself is all I can tell you :)
I would love to keep on being updated with the book chapters!
Keep being awesome girl!

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I have no words...

I decided to re-make my reviews on this wonderful book.
First IM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED!!
Second, you deserve more reviews this book is super good!
Amazing characters the plot the setting I'm so curious to know whats going to happen with Adonis!!
Like his father is it, Phillip??? Or is Phillip being controlled by his father??!!
I can't wait for the last chapter this must be a series!
Good job I love reading this book
Best Regards my friend
I can't wait to see what the future will bring to you!
-Leslie H.

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A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

I loved the book so far! How Zac and Emma interact with each other I like it! Emma reminds me of myself most of the time first with the fact I love reading and writing and how she tries to tolerate Zac (which is me trying to tolerate my friends).
Keep on writing girl! I can't wait for more!
You really have a nice writing future ahead of you!
P.S thank you for reviewing my book!

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Inmmortal Athenaeum

This short story is an amazing start I loved the first chapter and I'm so into this story! I cannot' wait until the next part of the story is added. The Author is very good at writing and separating her paragraphs I wish to see more perfect writer's like this author who clearly knew how to attract the attention of the reader.

I can see where this story is going to develop and grow I'm excited to see what happens next. Author honestly for being a short story it was really worth my time and I'm glad this book didn't disappoint me since I myself am not fond of short stories yours was an exception, my friend. Seriously I loved this short story and I'll make sure to check out the other two books this wonderful Author has in stock.

Good luck and keep writing!

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The Assassin's Beast

I know the title says this book is Under Editing I'm sorry I couldn't help but read it! The author has a wonderful talent for writing stories. I love Grace's personality and I love the fact that Hunter is not your typical werewolf shifter that hates humans he instead has a human friend of his own which I find that sweet.

There were a few grammar mistakes although this new version of the story is so good that you can't really see those grammar mistakes. I really like how the author knows how to attract the reader's attention for example I was so hooked just by reading the first chapter! Trust me not that many authors can surprise the readers starting with the first chapter I myself am personally one of those authors who needs to find ways to surprise and entertain her readers.

Overall I believe this story is going to be an awesome book and I hope to be updated with what's going on in the story. Excellent work!

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Into the Void

First of all the cover is wonderful!
The cover gives a perspective that the book is going to be scary and mysterious which is exactly what a good horror author would do to catch the reader's attention.
In the story, there were a few grammar mistakes but overall it was worth reading it and commenting my personal opinions about each chapter.
Jonathan's character is brave and confident at first he seems afraid and unsure about his dreams but in each chapter, he slowly starts getting stronger and capable of wanting to beat those creatures.
If Jonathan was a creepypasta he would be a very cool one his purpose would be to hunt demon-like creatures like the ones he saw in his dreams.
I've never read a horror book like this before it really was worth my time I would recommend this book to anyone who is a fan of this type of genre.
Overall the author did an excellent job with his writing style and in entertaining the reader I love this book thank you for recommending it to me!
Best of luck with your other works!

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A Teen Story

I have to admit that this story has hit me super hard.
I relate to Aria because I've also had mother-daughter problems in my life.
So I can understand how she feels when she was afraid to tell her mother what was happening in her private life but she still should've told her instead of her friends telling her mother.
The plot of the story is super good.
I liked all of the characters but what I'm enjoying most about this book is the connection between Bryson and Aria.
One tiny detail though if the author could just re-check her chapters and notice all the grammar errors her book has then that would make her book better.
Overall congrats on writing an amazing romantic love story!
Best of luck !
-Leslie H.

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Bullied by One Direction

First of all, I would like to congratulate the author on making this amazing fan-fiction book.
Second of all I just wanted to give you a small tip author.
You have a few grammar mistakes and your paragraphs are super long which makes it a little confusing to understand who is talking here is an example of how you can fix that.
Ex: (Taken from my book)

Hi there! I’m Zariah Miller but please don’t be afraid to call me Zara almost everyone does I’m 18 and I’m getting ready to start a fresh new year of College with my two best friends Lily and Gabriel. Here in Simiane La Rotonde, it may look normal but no don’t let our pretty little shops and exotic places make you feel safe!

I plan on studying to become a doctor like my dad he is a surgeon he was one of the best I want to be like him.

Do you see how I didn't write a whole paragraph all together? in some chapters of your book the paragraphs are all together without spaces.
If you fix this tiny mistake I believe your book will get better ^^
Overall I became quite fond to this story you did a well job on working on your character's traits and plot.
Keep writing!
-Leslie H,

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91 Days

I just read the first three chapters and I really do consider this book an excellent start.
The plot flows well with the suspense the author is trying to create with this story so we'll done with that.
The tile itself is really interesting and attracts the readers attention more I really want to know more about Alastor and His Dad what adventure will they find?
Overall I really think this book should be rated as one of the number #1 suspense book.
Small tip: Visualize more what you can add in your book don't write another chapter just because your followers beg you to do it for yourself and write because you have the talent to do so.
Splendid Job!
Keep me updated with your work please 😁
-Leslie H.

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Annoying Love Lust

This book was quite interesting to read.
I loved all of your plot and the story fell well together there were some mistakes I saw though.
You have a ton of grammar errors and sometimes those errors made it hard to understand what the characters were talking about sometimes also your paragraphs are all mushed up together and I really got lost in where I was reading at.
If you only take your time when reading and before you submit review your chapters it will get better and better in the end time will tell.
Overall that it was a good fantasy/romance book I loved your idea of vampires,werewolf's etc. Good job on that!
Good luck!
-Leslie H.

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The dog

Wonderful! My applause to the author who wrote this book her mentality to visualize this whole script was amazing this book really did remind me of that creepypasta called "Smile Dog" this story I recommend for the people who like suspense and horror I loved the way the author described the kills and the attacks so far this is one of the best horror books that actually managed to give me shivers just by the title!
Congrats on this book you deserve all of this support
Keep being awesome
-Leslie H.

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well done!

It's good I enjoyed your book you have a few grammar mistakes but I know you can fix them.
I loved your main characters and I did feel sad for Gabrielle's loss but I know that girl is strong and she will get better.
Ava and Gabrielle seem more like sisters than cousins but I adore their relationship!
Once again thank you for recommending me this book!
Continue Writing!
Best regards
-Leslie H.

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Im out of words for real...😯

LILYY!!!
I LOVED THIS SECOND BOOK!
AMAZING! WONDERFUL! MAGNIFICENT! UNIQUE!
Don't mind my caps there but wow! This was another adventure from Lily in the book we have romance but as well problems and some sad moments with the main characters Ellie, Collin, Luke, and Shane especially with Luke's death that hit me super hard its kind of a coincidence in my second book of my own series one of the main characters is in the risk of dying. Right now I think this book has me clear on what I will decide to do in the last book for my own series which I was stuck on for weeks. I can't tell you how much I loved this book! I picture you Lily as a future best selling author! Why do I say that? Because of the ideas and plot, you get for your own books! I wish I could be that great at writing πŸ˜… just a small suggestion don't write for your fans don't do it because people pressure you to do so write because you love to do so and because of your good at it! That will help you sure you can start on your next book but why not leave No One's Luna series books on Inkitt for a while and then post your new book just a small suggestion for a great writer like you.
Overall Lily this book was touching and really well written I can't wait to see more from you girl!
Best Regards my friend! 😁
-Leslie H.

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Wonderful!

I loved how you put your heart and soul in this their poetry book.
You did well at making my day better!
Continue writing I need more nice poems like yours to make me feel calm!
Wonderful writing you really have a talent!
Keep being you!

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One of the best!

I enjoyed this book and from what I've read there will be a second book?!
I must be one of the first people to read it!
Wonderful story!
Keep up the good work!
Loved your cover by the way!

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Good job

I really want to know who murdered them ( I forgot the names sorry lol) Your book is interesting with the mystery and suspicion I can't wait for more you did a splendid job my friend ^^
Nice grammar and punctuation.
Remember to always make your story interesting to get more readers overall this is pretty good.

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Enchanting!

I love the fantasy and adventure in this book I really want to know more!
Amazing writing skills author a few grammar mistakes but hey not everyone can write perfectly you know what I mean?
Keep on writing your characters are interesting.
I can't wait to see what the future brings to you!
Best Regards my friend

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Him

I NEED MORE UPDATES!
sorry for the caps lol I'm being serious though this is the first time I have ever read a Teacher/Student book before and may I say its really good!!
Well done with everything!
You have a good talent for writing don't waste it!
Keep writing!
Best regards to you my friend ^^
-Leslie H.

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Book 2!!

I'm excited about Book 2!!!
I swear I want to strangle Shane for stealing Ellie just like that!?
Man, this book is super good I don't regret reading it at all.
The author did an amazing job of writing and describing the interactions between her characters and their wolves.
I personally loved Ellie's attitude.
The author could actually become a professional author one day I bet she will!
I always enjoy a good romance/fantasy book especially the cliffhangers.
I really want this book to be seen by others and to get more reviews!
Author you are the best Inkitt writer I have met.
I will always make sure to check notifications from you when you update!
I am like your fan now on writing Im so inspired now to continue writing although Im still learning to get better.
Don't stop writing and I hope for the best for you!
Best Regards my friend ^^
-Leslie H.

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Impressive

Im actually into your story witches, vampires, love, and drama?
I came to the right book I'm sure of that :)
Nice writing skills in chapter 2 I was left in shock to want to read more good job.
What is going to happen with the main characters?
Love this story well done!
5-star rating!

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Talented

I love the first 5 chapters Im curious to know more about your characters!
You did a good job with no bad grammar or punctuation the whole story went out smoothly amazing.
I can't wait to hear more from you the story really caught my attention and got me more curious to know more about your main characters.
Absolutely Amazing!
Best regards and keep writing!
-Leslie H.

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Don't Give up!

Love it don't stop! Your getting close just keep working and everything will be fine my friend.
Little by little you will get better and more noticed.
I understand your feelings but your songs/poems are beautiful don't stop I beg you!
You have an amazing talent for writing and I value you for it!
Everything will get better just give it time.
Don't give up!

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Well done

I love this second book super captivating and it gets me hooked which is what books need for readers to love the story more.
You're so good with the cliffhangers!
I enjoy reading a good mystery/thriller book!
Need more updates on this and I'll make sure to comment on each chapter ^^
Good job!

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Speechless

I give you my congrats at writing this book.
C.L Brierley, you did an amazing job.
I don't know why I didn't read this book in the first place I'm so stubborn sometimes!
But wow the ending caught me off guard although it was obvious something like that was going to happen.
Sasha's and Dante's story was very well written.
You deserve the 5-star rating!
Your book is so good better than my own!
The whole plot was magnificent!
I can't wait to hear more from you girl!

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Hey!

Hi, this book is starting off great!
Honestly, you should continue don't stop!
Maybe right now you don't have that many followers or reviews but trust me if you work harder you will make it!
Trust me I've been there before.
You can do this keep updating Ill make sure to read it and check it out!
You're amazing have a good one!
-Leslie H.

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An Alpha's Vixen

I have been speechless.
THIS BOOK IS THE BEST!
Omg! I loved it just by reading the first chapter I love books like this!
Well done with your writing style!
DEFINITELY 5 STAR RATING!
I so need to recommend this book I enjoyed it so much.
I can't wait for more of your characters especially of Elizabeth I want to know what's up with her.
Keep being amazing and keep writing author!
I will recommend this book as much as I can!
You deserve much more than only a few followers!
Your book should show up as one of the popular ones for my friend its that good!
You should be very very proud of your accomplishment!
Best Regards!
-Leslie H.

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AWESOME!

I fell in love with this book vampire and curse?
Absolutely amazing caught my attention just reading the first chapter.
I can't wait for the sequel of it I'm really anxious to know more or Eleanor and Adrian.
I wonder if the group will be able to find Thomas.
I also hope Mary will find her beloved again!
Overall this is my top favorite book!
5 star rating definetly!
-Leslie H.

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SWEET!

I love it!
The characters! The setting oh the plot!
Amazing I really want to see more of this book and the characters maybe add some spice in the next upcoming chapters :)
Grammar errors? It doesn't matter not everyone is perfect!
(I also have those problems as well haha)
Keep using that talent of yours!
Im honored for having read a book like yours!
PS: Reviews and Comments on mine would be appreciated as well
You ROCK!
-Leslie H.

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Need more poems! ^^

You are good that first poem caught me in shock.
Very well done I can't wait to hear more from you, my friend!
Continue on writing!
-Leslie H.

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Lovely!

Loved the characters!
I can't wait for more
Ashley and Lane's relationship ooh I see romance starting to happen here soon lol!
Well done overall my friend! ^^
-Leslie H.

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Be awesome!

Your so good at writing books I'm always amazed at how well you do the plot and characters.
You have an amazing talent for writing!
Can't wait for more from you! :)
-Leslie H

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Decent!

I like the first chapter you should update more
You have an amazing talent for writing horror stories I love it!
Keep being awesome!!
Hope this review helped!
-Leslie H.

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Horror

It was good
I liked it you have a such amazing talent to write horror books it amazes me how well I can picture it almost as if I was in the story.
5 star rating you earned it my friend!
I also wrote some mystery/romance books that I would like if you could check out!
Love your books!

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NEED MORE UPDDATES!

This book is good!
I can't wait to read more from you're works!
I would love to get reviews from you on my own books! ^^
Well done love it!

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Woah!

That actually happened?
That caught me off guard!
But overall good start and details.
You have good writing skills that I like to see in other authors!
Good job!

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Good Start!

I really would like to hear more from this book but it's your decision
It's really interesting.
I'll make sure to check out you're other books!
Don't give up on writing!
keep being awesome! ^^

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Heart Warming!

I don't have the words to describe this book
But all I can say is that it was WONDERFUL, BEAUTIFUL, EMOTIONAL AND THE BEST!
You deserve more followers for writing all of those wonderful songs!
Don't stop being who you are!
Continue writing and I can't wait to hear more of your works!

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Has Potential!

This is an interesting book!
I feel bad for Zoe (I think I said her name wrong sorry if I did!) how she didn't want her parents to divorce but she ended up losing them both in a car crash that's sad!
I can't wait for more you deserve many more reviews than this!

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Wicked!!!

I love it! It's very good your good at the details and in the plot, this book caught my interest!
I did get confused a little in chapter 1.2 but I understood it later!
Well, grammar and punctuation your writing style seems so much of a real professional writer!
I rate this story 5 stars because it's true!
The same goes for the plot of the story go check out my books I would love to get better from comment s and reviews from someone like you!
I would love to keep getting updates of your works!
hope this review helped! :)

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Applause for you author!!

Amazing loved the details of how Isaiah was and his interaction with his parents!
You did a good job to entertain the reader!
I was so hooked just reading this first chapter!
A lot of mystery and your grammar was perfect!
Well done!

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The Best Book EVER!

I just gaped at how good this book was written!
You did an amazing job man not even my creepypasta books are that good!
I loved how you described the creepypastas in your way and how you knew how to stop them from killing you.
I loved this book so much the first time I read another person's creepypasta book!
My applause on this one!
Very well written and detailed well-done grammar and horror!

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Let's go !

This was very well done.
I liked the characters and ooh the drama! ;)
Well done!
Please go check out mine!
Keep writing amazing person!

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Creepy and Pasta!

I loved your horror book
It reminds me of how slender man controls his proxy's in my book.
Well done I loved it!
The horror did hit me though but hey I've read more scary things like this before!
You deserve the 5-star rating!
I'll be happy to continue reading your books!
Keep writing!

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Can't Wait For More!

Very nice prologue!
Can't wait for more just be sure to make a good description of your characters in the next chapter.
Hope this review helped! :)

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Wickedddd!!!

That's it!
5 stars review for this one just reading the first chapter got me hyped up!
Your actually good at writing books!
Continue with your work!
Don't give up and stay strong with writing !

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Pretty Good!

I liked how you make the plot look very well.
The rising action was very well done!
I can't wait for more !!
Go check out my books please! :)
Mack and Mason ooh I see the spice between them.

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Caught my attention!

It was a good book you did a good job!
The plot was very well explained I can't wait to read more of your books!
Could've made it longer but it was still worth the read!
Hope this review helped and you deserve the 5-star rating!

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Interesting

Perfect! Every single writing and detail was absolutely amazing.
My jaw was literally hitting the floor when I read this book.
The author did an amazing job with the characters and the setting.
I want to continue reading this book.
I might say this is my third favorite online book

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Well Done!

I personally think that this book is very interesting and fascinating
How clear the plot is!
I can picture every single detail in my mind!
You did a good job!
Marvelous girl!
I will continue to read your books if you read my two fanfiction ones!
How Damien is it amazes me.
Destiny does remind me in some ways!
keep writing!

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AMAZING!

I love your book!
The characters the setting I could literally see it in my mind.
You have an interesting imagination!
Keep being awesome and continue writing
I would actually like to do a co-writing with you.
Go check out my books and give me your opinion on mine.
I will surely continue to read this book :)

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Its good!

I enjoyed reading your book for it has potential!
You really do deserve all of those 56 reviews you got! :)
I love the plot and all of the ideas you had on making this book
I will love to get updates on what your doing on your books!
Keep writing!
10/10 cool book!
P.S A review and comments on my books would be very nice as well!

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Keep on being Awesome!!

I love the book and the plot!
you have a nice writer's future ahead of you girl!
Don't let anybody take away your talent!
I hope to stay updated with every book you make!
If you could review my books I would love that!
Have a good one!

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This Is good

Nice writing skills Im hooked I can't want to see what else happens between Tracy & Xavier!
Keep writing author!
Continue being awesome!
Update soon!

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Love it so far!

Continue writing you have a nice talent for it!
Would love if you could give me a review on my books as well!
Don't let anyone ruin your spirit in making your dream career come true!
Have a good day and keep on writing!!

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Good Job!

Im amazed keep writing I know you can make the story a great hit!
Your really good don't give up!
You have someone that wants you to continue writing!
Would appreciate a review on my books!
Keep being amazing author!

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Wicked!

For not having english as your main language you did an amazing job in this book!
I loved it! You did a good job author!
I really hope you will continue to write more books and I would love for you to keep me updated on it.
Everyone has the talent to write even if they don't know the language well!
Have a good day and keep being awesome!

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I'm hooked!

So far I can't wait for you to update the next chapter!
It's interesting and I'm really excited what will happen with Becca!
Amazing writing as always!
The best author of books I've ever met

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Good job!

I think that your doing great for writing your first book!
Keep on writing author!
Your doing amazing! Keep on going!
I really like the interaction that Holland and Dylan have it's wanting me to know more about what will happen to these two!

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Loved it!

I loved everything about the book! I'm glad that in the end Alice got a good relationship with her husband!
I loved how in the end he was so loving with her!
You did an amazing job author!

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Loved it!

I choose the 5 star rating because even though It has a few errors I can still visualize the story in my mind!
Keep on showing your talent of writing!
Would appreciate a review for my book!
Loved the book and characters!

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Wicked!

I loved this book! How Austin and Emma interact with each other it literally amazed me in a way you cant imagine!!
Keep on writing!!
You really write like a writer!
Would appreciate a review for my book!
Amazing the best romance book I've read so far!

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