Jean K Allison

Orlando, FL

I'm a senior at UCF and will be attending UTHSC Pharmacy in the fall. I play ultimate frisbee. I like to read, write, and crochet. My other interests include board games, penicillium, and dinosaurs.

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Really Good

Overall, I really liked this story. My only thing is that I feel like some things happened without a reason and something's never got a good answer. I see there is a second book, but some of the unanswered things don't feel like they would be answered in it.

I would still totally recommend this to peeps.

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Beta Stone

It was a good story. I would really like the author to go back and flesh the story out. It has a great base, but some things moved slowly while others moved very quickly. I would have liked to have more explanation about the characters' growths. They definitely changed, but it was explained very well.

I would still recommend this book. I still enjoyed the read overall. I think if the author wrote another edition it could reach it's full potential.

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