J_L_Patton

Phoenix

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Great Book

I read through that all in just about one sitting. I was hanging on every word. I loved the way the author would switch between generations. By the end, I was nearly crying.

Other then a lot of spelling errors or missing words, I found this to be a great read.
Thank you for sharing!

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Amazing!

My Gosh! I couldn't put this down! The way the main charactor's life and feelings were laid out was amazing. I enjoyed the world that was created. The detail into the way a military worked and the equipment being used was fantastic.
Other then a couple missing words and minor spelling errors, I found that this was a great piece of art.

Thank you, Day, for a truly wouderful read!

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Amazing

The way the author writes is quite expressive. I was laughing and hanging on every word. I felt like I was standing next to the charactors and feeling what they felt. I am so happy to have read this. Thank you so much for writing this!!!

A few minor spelling errors but overall one of the greatest YA books I have read.

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