Helenaa1

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Beautiful.

I am sorry for taking so much of time for this review.
First of all, I totally loved the story. I was interested on reading it just from the first chapter. Probably just go back and make the sentences more intriguing. Lovely plot and background story. I suggest using some more vocabulary to make the story feel more powerful.
I really loved it!!!
All the best!!

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Indeed Out Of The Box

I am not much of a fantasy person, actually😅. But this story really kept me on a steady beat, and I finished reading it in one sitting. I really loved the background of the characters. Beautiful writing, with proper grammar and vocabulary. Had me hooked up till the very end.
You indeed have the talent!!
All the best!
Can't wait to read more!!

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