This story is very progressive. I like the main characters so far ( i am on chapter 5) and i am hoping to read more chapters. The writing, style, plot and everything is so far so good, i can really understand and read the story very well.
The story really sticks to its themes and its target audience. Hoping to read more romance in the future chapters
So far so good and a good plot
There are a shortage in books aimed within the LGBT genre so i was determined to read at least 5 chapters of this story (will be reading more of course, now that i'm reviewing) but yes, so far the characters seem interesting, the story has highlighted issues within the lgbt scene like when it comes to conflict between spirituality and sexuality, lgbt relationship abuse etc and there may be in fact more. At the moment i can understand the story well and like the title says "So far so good!"Read the story now
I read the whole of this short erotic story and i had to review it! this had a great plot and the pace of the story moved at a consistent pace, that gripped me from the get-go. The characters were interesting and i felt complemented each other perfectly to mend their differences to bring them both, to a place of completion ;) and all were technically engaging in what the author described of their personalities etc.
I hope you make more short stories, but this has great potential to be in the competition in the first place.
The truth in the dark
:) this is the most interesting fan-fic i have read from the Harry Potter universe. I am looking forward to the next chapters. There are a few changes made, when it comes to the Harry potter timeline but it doesn't affect the story that much.
But so far so good. Will be closely reading this
Plot is promising
There is a market for gay fiction and i'm happy that i've seen a story about opposites attracting. I would just advise you to make chapters a little bit longer and to have a bit more of a background story to your characters. There is a little but it could do with a little more.
Other than that i can read through it alright and looking forward to a 5th chapter if you are going to do one
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