JohnOsurama

A writer who is from New York whose writing is from everywhere else.

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Nice hook

Great hook. One of the few books on here keeping me from scrolling elsewhere. Only criticism - the flashback in the first chapter, although, for the sake of argument, as the author says, 'time doesn't happen in chronological order.' So, I will give the structure a pass. Solid 4 stars though. Keep it up!

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