Joshii

Cebu,Philippines

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False Vampire Love

So..I loved the story so far! They were Spelling Mistakes but..It's not a big issue, All of Us Authors do make mistakes :')

I can't wait for the next chapter!

(P.S, I skipped the whole..Smut Scene xd, I don't read smuts because well..I'm an Innocent Child haha, I hope you won't mind, I didn't skipped anything, I just skipped that partπŸ˜…)

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I Have Come This Far (Poems)

Wow, This is a pretty long PoemπŸ˜… I suggest putting them in a separate chapter so that Readers can read it easily, Overall..I like it, I like poems so..This is definitely the Book I would read :)

-JoshLovesYou

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ICENI (Joshii's Review)

Hello! JLY Here (JoshLovesYou)

So Overall, I really like your Novel, Mostly because your way of writing really captured me into this Novel, Although I have one downfall of it, The Word you use "Savage" I just..don't feel like it can work with your writing style, It just..doesn't fit into this Fantasy Novel. I'm sorry if this hurted you but..I got to be honest :')

But Overall, I really liked this Novel, I Suggest you can find some words to replace the word "Savage" In this Novel.

Keep Writing! Don't Stop! :)

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The Story of Me

Nice Poetry ^^

I really don't have anything else to say about it since it's short.

Also, Are you a BTS Fan? If you are, I'm Sorry But I usually don't follow Kpop Accounts. I kind of feel bad because You've been kind to me.

I'm trying to get away from Kpop because It's becoming toxic. And I don't want to interact with Kpop Fans on this App.

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Mathilda -With Tears in Her Eyes (Joshii's Review)

I almost cried at the ending, Why Pamela? If you haven't abord your Daughter, You would've had a Loving Daughter who cares for you and Her Dad, Fred, So So Much.

about this Novel, It's amazing! β™‘
I loved it! It's such a Happy but a Sad Story at the same time.

I'm glad Pamela and Fred Reunited at the End! It's such a Happy Ending to a Good Novel!

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Ikemefuna (Joshii's Review)

Nwaeze is dead at the end, Oh my Gosh, Poor Guy, I think for me, This Story taught me Something, it's never to be Greedy, Enoka wanted that Land even though His Father already gaved it to Okeke.

Overall, I enjoyed this Story! This will be the last One I'll Read for Today, I'll read more Tomorrow! Keep Writing! God Bless!

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Wisdom Of The Gods (Joshii's Review)

Great God Story! I love how the People Worshipped their God, (Well..Except for Bero) I feel like Bero's Character is..kind of..Cocky? Like he seems to be so Confident about changing the Kingdom of Shongali to be Modern like London or New York.

But Overall, I really liked this Story! It's Interesting But In a Good Way! :)

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Pages of Mary's Diary (Joshii's Review)

I loved it! The Author's Writing Style really Captivated Me, I feel Really Bad for Mary, She got her Heart broken 2 times but..I'm glad she had a Happy Ending to her Disastrous Life, Hope is always the Answer if you feel like you want to Give up at Life.

I see No Grammar or Spelling Mistakes, That's Really Good! I sometimes see a few Mistakes in a Story but Not with this One :')

Keep Writing! Your Books definitely Have Potential! You will definitely be a Great Author in the Future!

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My Past and Present (Joshii's Review)

Hello! This is JLY (JoshLovesYou)

First off, I like this Story, It had a Tragic Beginning but..The Chapters got more interesting for each Chapter.

And about your Writing, There's no problem with it, They were a few errors and Spelling Mistakes But a Re-Read should do the trick.

So Far, Keep Going! Your Story has Potential to become a Great One! Keep Writing! β™‘

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The Darkening World (Joshii's Review)

Hello! Joshii Here! For the Review, Well..It's a Great Start so far! There were a few errors here and there but..I can see potential in your Story :) I think you should add descriptions like..How did the Character looked like, Their Backstory, etc, Something that makes it more interesting and Exciting to Read, But So Far, Great Story! Keep Going!

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Ghosts of our Own Making (Joshii's Review)

Wow, I felt nostalgic while reading this Horror StoryπŸ˜… I love it! It's a Great Horror Book, And I love Horror Books, I would definitely recommend this One! There were a few Spelling Mistakes but It's not that much of a Problem, I would definitely recommend this Novel to someone who likes Horror Books, I feel really bad for Young Joseph though...Poor Child :(

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The Cursed Coin (Joshii's Review)

It's an Interesting Story so far! But it was a bit difficult to read, I suggest that after you wrote the chapter, You can Read it so that you can spot the mistakes but overall, Keep Writing! β™‘

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The Assassin's Beast (My Review)

It's a Good Alpha Story! I really don't read these kinds of stories because the plot is always the sams like the weak girl, The Strong Alpha etc. But This has a Mix up, I think the Author did a Good Job Writing this Novel, There were a few spelling errors but a Re-Read will do to fix them, So Overall, I would recommend this Book to those who likes Alpha Stories, Keep Writing!

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Stripped Roses

Aww~ I really loved the Story, I'm glad it had a happy ending haha, I thought it would be a sad ending like Anna and Sean would fight but..I really loved the ending, There were a few grammar issues but overall, Great Story! Keep Writing!

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Stuck

Wow, Haha, I really love the plot so far, They were some error mistakes so..I think it needs reviewing but..Overall, Good Job! I'm seriously shipping Austine and Kim so hardπŸ˜‚ I feel kind of Bad for Wesley though, Poor Guy, And I'm seriously angry at Kim's Father for cheating on Her Mom, Just like that But..Keep Writing! I'm excited for the Next Chapter! β™‘

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Jovieonni's Story

What? I'm obsessed Getting 5 0 ReviewsπŸ˜…

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Only The Edge Knows

Uhm..I DID NOT see the Ending Coming, Poor Laura :( So..I think this story is a Oneshot, If I'm correctπŸ˜… They were a few Error's, I'll point them out, The "My Parent" Part, I think you can add an "S" at the end since well..It's Laura's Parents, Both of her Mom and Dad? And The "Farwell" part, It should be "Farewell" But Overall, I enjoyed the story, Even though I was kind of Angry at Lydia, So..Good Job! Keep Writing!

-JoshLovesYou

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The Doyens

So..Overall..I quite Enjoyed the Story haha, They were some slight error mistakes, I will point them out, The Part where it said "I will beat him to pulp" I think you should add an "A" like this "I will beat him to a Pulp" But Overall, it's an Interesting Story like School to School Rivals, Yikes, Sam and Jenny must've had a Hard Time and I got Ronald Wesley Vubes from Ron Haha, Sorry, I'm a Very Huge Potter headπŸ˜‚ So..That's for my Review! Keep Writing! And I hope you'll update soon!

-JoshLovesYou β™‘

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Pinwheel

Overall, I'm quite proud of this Oneshot, I think the Writing style is excellent! And The Plot is so Good! Also a Bit Sad, Poor Woozi :( But...Loved this Story!

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Wanted by the Devil

I think it's a great start for a story! The Prologue got me really Interested for the whole plot, They are a few mistakes but they're not really a big deal for me, So..Overall..A Great Start!

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