Joshua Collins

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Quite good.

This was a enjoyable story so far. Your writing style is engaging, simple and very descriptive enough that I can very much envision anything that's going on. Your characters are well written in a way that each character seem to have their own quirks and flaws and doesn't make them too lacking in depth and growth that some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage our emotions. Any mistakes in grammar and such are seen as minor and don't distract from the story.

Even though this isn't fully a completed, this has potential in being a good written novel and I wish you luck on your writing!

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Very good!

This is a good read! The story flows so nicely, the author has a gift for prose. The world is so well described and fleshed out it feels like the reader is actually there. The writing style is really quite something, and allowed me to vividly picture everything that was going on. The characters are all unique and extremely well-written, each one having an extra layer to them that makes them three-dimensional and more lively overall. Their humanity makes it easy to go along with the story and understand where each character's loyalty lies, what their personality is, and what their reasons are for doing the thing they do. I would absolutely recommend to anyone looking for a good read.

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Has potential to be a good fantasy.

This is such an good fantasy tale with good amounts of lore and world building. The details and rules of the world make sense (something that isn't easy to do when you're creating an original world - as I seen from other novels) and make for an incredibly enticing story and world. The characters are well defined and there was ample detail to give me a clear picture of what was happening without having these details be overwhelming. There were some mistakes in spelling and grammar, yet they are minor mistakes and don't distract from the story.

Overall, you done such an amazing job on the story you built. There's so much going on that keeps you intrigued and engaged and I would really recommend this for anyone who's into fantasy such as this.

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Has great potential to be a good immersive fantasy!

This is such an good fantasy tale with good amounts of lore and world building. The details and rules of the world make sense (something that isn't easy to do when you're creating an original world - as I seen from other novels) and make for an incredibly enticing story and world. The characters are well defined and there was ample detail to give me a clear picture of what was happening without having these details be overwhelming. Can't find much fault in your writing and grammar, which I think is a wonderful thing.

Overall, you done such an amazing job on the story you built. There's so much going on that keeps you intrigued and engaged and I would really recommend this for anyone who's into fantasy such as this.

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Quite good!

This was a good story so far. Your writing style simple yet descriptive enough that I can very much envision anything that's going on. Your characters are well written in a way that each character seem to have their own quirks and flaws and doesn't make them too lacking in depth and growth that some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage our emotions. It makes the character interactions more immerseive. There were a few mistakes in grammar, though not to major and didn't distract me from the story.

Overall this is a pretty good story so far and I would recommend this to anyone and I wish you well on your future writings.

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Very good potential!

Great potential.

This was a enjoyable story so far. Your writing style is very engaging simple and very descriptive enough that I can very much envision anything that's going on. Your characters are well written in a way that each character seem to have their own quirks and flaws and doesn't make them too lacking in depth and growth that some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage our emotions. I can't find any fault in your grammar and such which is a wonderful thing!

I'm aware that it isn't exactly finish, which is the reason why I haven't rate it higher, though when it's done I may read it over again.

Overall this is a pretty good story so far and I would recommend this to anyone and I wish you well on your future writings.

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Has good potential!

This was a good story so far. Your writing style is very engaging simple and very descriptive enough that I can very much envision anything that's going on. Your characters are well written in a way that each character seem to have their own quirks and flaws and doesn't make them too lacking in depth and growth that some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage our emotions. The only thing I'll say is to look over your spelling and grammar as there are quite an amount of mistakes, though those mistakes are seen as minor and don't distract from the story.

Overall this is a pretty good story and I would recommend this to anyone and I wish you well on your future writings.

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Great potential.

This was a enjoyable story so far. Your writing style is very engaging simple and very descriptive enough that I can very much envision anything that's going on. Your characters are well written in a way that each character seem to have their own quirks and flaws and doesn't make them too lacking in depth and growth that some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage our emotions. I can't find any fault in your grammar and such which is a wonderful thing!

I'm aware that it isn't exactly finish, which is the reason why I haven't rate it higher, though when it's done I may read it over again.

Overall this is a pretty good story so far and I would recommend this to anyone and I wish you well on your future writings.

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Well done

This is such an good fantasy tale with good amounts of lore and world building. The details and rules of the world make sense (something that isn't easy to do when you're creating an original world - as I seen from other novels) and make for an incredibly enticing story and world. The characters are well defined and there was ample detail to give me a clear picture of what was happening without having these details be overwhelming. There were some mistakes in spelling and grammar, yet they are minor mistakes and don't distract from the story.

Overall, you done such an amazing job on the story you built. There's so much going on that keeps you intrigued and engaged and I would really recommend this for anyone who's into fantasy such as this.

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Great work!

This is a really good read! The story flows so nicely, the author has a gift for prose. The world is so well described and fleshed out it feels like the reader is actually there. The writing style is really quite something, and allowed me to vividly picture everything that was going on. The characters are all unique and extremely well-written, each one having an extra layer to them that makes them three-dimensional and more lively overall. Their humanity makes it easy to go along with the story and understand where each character's loyalty lies, what their personality is, and what their reasons are for doing the thing they do. I would absolutely recommend to anyone looking for a good read.

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Amazing world and lore!

I must say, this is a really detailed and high lore fantasy. I quite enjoy books that built on world-buliding and lores such as heavily as this. The amount of descriptive details you put in this, is really impressive. Reading though this is really impressive and it was quite difficult to find a stopping point. I can't find any faults or mistakes, as you done a thoroughly good job typing this story out. The characters are done in a good way that makes them seem like they are distant, with their own quicks and flaws.

Overall this is a really good fantasy and I would recommend this to anyone. Good writing/typing!

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Wow!

I must say, this is a really detailed and high lore fantasy. I quite enjoy books that built on world-buliding and lores such as heavily as this. The amount of descriptive details you put in this, is really impressive. Reading though this is really impressive and it was quite difficult to find a stopping point. I can't find any faults or mistakes, as you done a thoroughly good job typing this story out. The characters are done is a good way that makes them seem like they are distant, with their own quicks and flaws.

Overall this is a really good fantasy and I would recommend this to anyone. Good writing/typing!

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Good work!

Your story is quite an unique story of its own. I never read any stories that are mainly about sirens and I found how you interpret them (mainly the main character who's a siren), a refreshing way of going about your story. You good at being descriptive and i can very much follow along and envision everything that's going on. The characters are quite written out pretty well for them to feel expressive and engaged in our emotions.

Wonderful job so far. I really hope others will engage in your book. With the amount of work you put in your writing. You really deserve it.

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Oragon is a very neat world and I like to know more!

I really much enjoyed what you written so far. Very descriptive writing that I'm quite drawn in the story. Especially on wanting to know more about Oragon, it's world, it's magic and such. You also have a pretty good writing style, simple and easy to follow through and I thought the the journal from Maya's great great aunt, the way its been written was a pretty neat way of a written language in the 13 century.

Overall, It's a really neat story and I would definitely want to know more about it. Good job, so far.

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So good.

This is such a good book. Good plot, good characters. I really liked Dena's character, she seems cute in a descriptive sense XD. The writing is really on point, very engaging and descriptive that i can really much picture all of it. Can't wait to see what's next. 👍🏻

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Ronin: The Sword Who Cuts The Heavens

I really enjoyed this book. I'm a sucker for Samurai stories and anything that involves them. I really love the story and plot for this one. The characters are well written and the main character Manji is a very interesting character that seems himself as first a bad ass killer, to someone who loses his skills to kill and easily takes lives and starts relying on others to help him along the way. His personality changes too as someone who firsts thinks he would never be friends with anyone, to eventually thinking his companions as friends and the development bond between him and Masami is great. The action in this is well written and kept me intrigued as well as the drama. There's also enough commentary to keep things light and I love Manji's first person perspective as he does think some very interesting and hilarious words. Overall I really enjoyed this book and I can't wait for the next remaining parts of this series. ☺️

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