J.R

I’m a teen who has fallen in love with reading and writing. Writing is when you paint your own art. Reading is when you step into someone else’s art.

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Complications of words (read to read)

Very sad, I didn´t expect this read to be like this.
Strong words. Sensitive topics overall to address with writing. You have a way with words, and you should continue writing from your soul. This poem book was really heavy and powerful and not at all what I usually read, but it was meaningful and true. I like that. I hope you will work things out.

This read was almost to heavy for me to read. All I can say is to continue writing. You have a gift with that and let it ignite.

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Henry Danger

I like the characters and I’m curious of how the plot will continue! I feel so bad for Henry now when Piper knows he’s kid danger! Keep on writing chapters with cliffhangers, those are the best!

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What a thriller!

This book is so so good! I really like how you end every chapter with a cliffhanger. Great character descriptions. Reading this is very vivid for me and I ask of you one thing, never stop writing.

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Intriguing

I absolutely love this and can’t wait for more. This genre isn’t usually what I read but what you have created is something I can’t stop reading!

Reading this is like watching a movie for me, you have created vivid characters given them depths and mystery. It’s likewise with how you describe everything else;the different environments that are included.

I saw a little grammar that could improve, but those you should focus on after you’ve finished writing this excellent work you have going on.

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The Ethan Chronicles

I really enjoyed this so far and it’s very well written! The story has humor and the reader really gets involved in Ethan’s way of thinking both emotionally and creatively.

When I read the story I can see all of the scenes so vividly and it’s like they form a movie in my head.

Keep up your creative work on this!

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Can You Explain?

The poems are all powerful and beautiful. I liked the mystic in them so you could picture your own interpretation.

The writing style is great!

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Demon Cat

A very interesting plot and I like how the reader gets to follow the perspective of a cat.

I like your idea with the demon cat and it’s exciting how the story will continue to form. It feels like an original idea and that is something I think we all need more of in the reading world.

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True Colour

I enjoyed reading this! It was very insightful and poetic. Keep writing! For next time maybe a more clear thread, otherwise it’s really something! The grammar is correct and so many metaphors are so beautiful!

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