Kami_goddess

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Horror books...

While personally Horror books are not my cup of tea, I have to say that this one was good so far. The author has an attention for detail and excellent dialogue. While the chapter's are long it does not take away from the book experience. I would suggest chopping up the chapters so that some readers don't lose interest. I would recommend it to anyone who likes the horror genre.

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Hmmmm

A really good story. I noticed the author use's "I" a lot to describe the characters actions. (Don't worry I do this to). I would suggest you find other ways to describe actions. Like in the second chapter you wrote
"I went into the city"
You could replace that with
"Going into the city to get medicine for Ray."
You also have a few grammar errors in the first few chapter, nothing big but it could be fixed by editing.
I would love to see more details in the chapter's and maybe trying to use Italics's more when your in the character's thoughts.

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Realistic

Very good story! The main character is an bad ass who lives each day like its her last. The plot moves along at a steady speed. Very good grammar and no punctuation errors that I could see. I would totally recommend it to anyone who likes people who break the rules.

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Cannot put down!

As soon as I started reading the book it I couldn't stop. The plot is well developed and moves with an ease. There is just enough of mystery to keep yourself thinking about what will happen next. Very few grammar mistakes so don't worry about the story not making sense. And I love how the characters talk like how us teens would!

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