Has great potential
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I really enjoyed the humor you added to the story. I think it gives Scarlet (or Stacy Macaroni) a relatable texture that can be hard to find in some books these days. I love werewolf stories myself, so I am biased when it comes to plots but I definitely think your plot has a lot of potential. I highly encourage you to keep working on it!
Things to pay attention to:
From a technical standpoint, the grammar could have some work done. It can be especially hard to read large blocks of text. This normally is not a huge problem for readers. But it's just a little tip.
There are some areas that can have a more in-depth description. When writing in the first person POV, it's important to gauge your character's senses and show what they feel rather than tell.
Again, I think your story has really great potential and I can't wait to read more of it.