๐–’๐–Š๐–˜๐–˜๐–Š๐–‰ ๐–š๐–• ๐–‡๐–Ž๐–™๐–ˆ๐–

๏ฝ•๏ฝ“๏ฝ…๏ฝŒ๏ฝ…๏ฝ“๏ฝ“ ๏ฝ๏ฝ‰๏ฝ…๏ฝƒ๏ฝ… ๏ฝ๏ฝ† ๏ฝ“๏ฝˆ๏ฝ‰๏ฝ”

๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š๐š’๐š›๐š• ๐šข๐š˜๐šž ๐šŠ๐š›๐šŽ ๐š•๐š˜๐š˜๐š”๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š๐š˜๐š› ๐š’๐šœ๐š—'๐š ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š›๐šŽ, ๐šœ๐š‘๐šŽ'๐šœ ๐š™๐š›๐š˜๐š‹๐šŠ๐š‹๐š•๐šข ๐š’๐š— ๐šœ๐š˜๐š–๐šŽ ๐šŒ๐š˜๐š›๐š—๐šŽ๐š› ๐š๐š›๐š˜๐š ๐š—๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š’๐š— ๐š๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š›๐šœ, ๐š‹๐šž๐š ๐šœ๐š‘๐šŽ ๐šŠ๐šœ๐š”๐šŽ๐š ๐š–๐šŽ ๐š๐š˜ ๐š™๐šŠ๐šœ๐šœ ๐šŠ ๐š–๐šŽ๐šœ๐šœ๐šŠ๐š๐šŽ: "๐š๐šž๐šŒ๐š” ๐š˜๐š๐š" ๐šœ๐š‘๐šŽ'๐šœ ๐š‹๐š›๐š˜๐š”๐šŽ๐š—. ๐™›๐™ช๐™˜๐™ , ๐™จ๐™๐™š'๐™จ ๐™ฅ๐™ง๐™ค๐™—๐™–๐™—๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™™๐™š๐™–๐™™

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Hooking!

I really loved the read, I especially loved the first chapters with the meanings and all, and the poems (I'm a sucker for poetry)

Your writing style makes you want to read more and more, and I think your plot is wonderful.

Keep writing and never give up! xx

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Interesting!!

I really loved the plot, and the characters, not to mention how diverse it is! I love her confidence and her personality, I would love to be friends with her!

You struggle a bit with your grammar and writing style, but that can be fixed easily.

Overall, I love the book, and will always be waiting for new chapters!

Keep it up and never stop writing xx ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

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Captivating!

I really love this ff so far! This is my first Yoongi fanfic, and I was quite skeptical at first, but now I'm probably addicted! I really love Jiwoo's character, she isn't the typical shy girl I usually see. I love the plot of the whole story, and I'm eagerly waiting for more! Never stop writing๐Ÿคฉ

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Wow. Just wow.

I absoutelt love it! Paranormality and ghost stories are usually at the deep end of my genre preferences, but you might've got me hooked on this! I love your writing style and vocabulary you use. Can't wait for the next chapter! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Nice story!

I actually really liked this story, and the character Alicia, I found the book really interesting, I read the entire book in like 7 minutes lmao ๐Ÿ˜… There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but practice makes perfect, and I'm not a grammar queen either โœจ

Excited for the next chapters!

Lots of love and support,
Katelyn_Mochi ๐Ÿ’œ

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Alluring!

This collection of poems is really alluring, first starting with the cover page. It just makes you want to read it.

The use of words, vocabulary and writing style is all amazing, and I love it.

Although this isn't my cup of dark poetry, I absolutely loved the read. Waiting for more!

Keep writing and never give up! xx

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Very Captivating!

I read it, and it had so much detail and was very captivating. Only very minimal grammar mistakes, but I really enjoyed it. Waiting for more!

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Very nice!

I think these poems are really nice...they convey a lot of emotion too, some really hit home, loved them!

Keep writing, and never give up!! xx

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Amazing!!

I really love this story!!! I love the plot, and even though there are only three chapters, I am literally addicted to this story! Only a few errors here and there, but other than that, it's a perfect fanfiction! I am so eager for the next chapters ๐Ÿ’œ

Never give up writing and shoot for the stars xx โœจ

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Really intense!

I really found this quite intense, and I loved how the strong character is a female. The first two chapters were a bit confusing, and I feel like there were too many characters introduced at once. Few grammar errors here and there, but no one is perfect, right? I'm sure you will improve.

All though these type of stories aren't exactly my cup of tea, I found the plot quite alluring. Waiting for more!

Never give up xx

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Love it!

This fanfic is really good! Even though I'm really into mafia-themed fanfics, I loved this one!

I know English is not your first language, so grammar mistakes will be there, but there is always room for improvement!

The only minor flaws are that you might want to check your work before submitting it, that way you can catch the spelling and capitalizing mistakes.

My advice to you is to download Grammarly, it will help you a lot, even I use it, and I noticed a difference in my writing!

Block out the negativity, shine with positivity, and never give up your writing! Love and support from your friend๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

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Pretty good story!

Hi Jamie, I read this book, and I actually really loved it! I love the characters and the storyline. You only have very few errors, but practice makes perfect! I read this all in one go because I wanted to know what was gonna happen next! Awesome story, keep writing more, and never give up! ๐Ÿ’•

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Nice

Hey Austin Watson, it was nice reading! I think it could do better though. You need to fix your technical aspects, especially where to capitalize a letter at the beginning of a sentence, and proper nouns. Try sectioning it into paragraphs for the reader to read easily. Also, I think the story moves a bit too fast. You should slowly build the story, so its not too much of a rush. These two chapters could have been elaborated into maybe 7 chapters.

Overall, I think you will definitely improve!

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