Katherine Baskerville

Manila

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So Far So Good

The story so far simply has an introduction but it shows that the characters are rich in terms of personality. They have prominent traits and the sorts, which is a good thing. I won't rate fully until I've seen at least a few more chapters :) But the writing style isn't too dragging which is good so I'll keep this on the reading list.

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A Good Read!

Going through it, it was a little confusing at first but the story in itself is good. It shows different sides of magic - the divine spectrum, arcane spectrum and, the dark spectrum which really shows the characters' personalities. Going through the chapters so far, the plotline seems to be good as well - the whole hunting down the witches thing. It's a modern depiction of the Salem Witch Hunts which is something worth looking at.

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Not really my cup of tea but still..

I don't usually read playwright style stories. Most of the times, I get confused because it's hard to visualize the emotions. But this one seemed to be able to expression the emotion that Margo was feeling despite it being in playwright. I could feel the frustration felt when she turned vampire and couldn't control her powers. Although there were some minor punctuation issues, it can be fixed after re-skimming through the chapters. :) But nonetheless keep on writing, stories can never be completely judged until they're finished. :)

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It's doing well so far

The story sounds good on first read. Although I can't say much about the plot yet because of it's only one chapter. But nonetheless, it seems to come off at a good start - the whole "get-sucked-into-a-storybook" kind of thing. The introduction actually reminds me of that one from How to Train Your Dragon, how Hiccup introduces Berk. Maybe you can put more gestures than just tagging with "said" - maybe more actions that would dictate their mood instead of saying what their mood is. :) Anyway, looking forward to see what this will progress to!

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Elf and Fae

Although this a concept that many people have used, the story has a good concept behind it. It just got a little confusing when it started meshing some modern elements. The environment was built well and I liked the prologue of this tale. I can't judge yet completely and I'm looking forward to more!

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It's a good story!

I like the plot of how it started as a prophecy. It somewhat reminded me about the myth of the City of Atlantis. Although, I think your dialogue could use a little more work. It seemed a little choppy for me but describing the scenery over all is what made the story immersive.

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