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A great view into a different culture

One thing I can say for certain, and appreciate is when I can see and sense someone doing their research, or at least have an understanding of a culture.
This story is a great idea, and there's so much to use and enjoy! While I'm not a fan of titling whose point of view it is (primarily because there are other means of stating it, but it's a simple fix, and personal opinion so take it as you wish) I love the writing and how your story provides a view into an ancient styles of another culture.
I love when stories help me learn something, and I think you've got a great foundation for a great journey!

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