KittieGirl1616

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Enchanting!

The beach theme is a great touch! I'm definitely interested to see how storm spirits are incorporated into this story! Keep up the good work and don't get discouraged!

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Really Good!

While this story definitely has some grammar issues towards the very beginning, you fix them as you go along. The plot of this story is extremely unique and I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep writing!

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