Koko Aranck

Also writes as SusanKayMorningstar https://www.inkitt.com/SusanKayMorningstar

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A lot of fun

This book is a lot of fun to read. It already pulls you in and makes you want to know what's going to happen next. I like how strong the main is, physically and mentally. She took her new life, and made it just that, HERS. Can't wait to see what happens when she finds her mate. =) I'd recommend this to anyone who enjoys strong females.

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Love the Plot

I love the plot of the story. It needs some touch ups here and there on punctuation and grammar, but over all, it's a really good story. I can't wait to read more. And yes, I would recommend reading this book. I can't wait to see what happens next, so I'll get back to reading now =)

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Good story so far

I've only read the first chapter so far, but it has a wonderful feel to it. A bit confusing to who is talking at times, and grammar needs a bit of work. but the over all feel of the book is nice. I like the plot and will read more. I would definitely recommend this book to all readers, and i'll ask my friends to read and review it for you, I think they'd enjoy it as much as me, and maybe you can return the favor with them and read one of theirs. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more.

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Intriguing

Nice start to an intriguing story. I like the brothers and Jax. I hope they can find a way to change their destiny. Fate and Destiny can be bitches. Definitely recommend this for a good read. It has a lot of originality, and is fun to read.

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Great Story

I really liked this story. I went through all the emotions. Happy, sad, angry, scared, I cried, I, laughed. Had lots of wonderful twists and turns. I guessed a few things that happened (I'm pretty good at that), but a lot of it was like, wow, didn't see that coming.
There's a lot of missed words, and the grammar and punctuation needs work, but the story is good enough to row right over the mishaps.
I would recommend anyone and everyone to give this book a try. I may even check out her other books ;)

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Intriguing story

It's seems like a fun story so far. The beginning wasn't very pleasant, but cutting up deer never is. Good read, bad memories, that stuff stinks as much as it is gross to watch. lol. Very detailed, felt like i was there watching. I'm definitely going to read more, and i would recommend it for a nice read. The punctuation could use a lot of work, need more commas, and the grammar could have a look see. But that aside, as I said in title, intriguing story. And don't worry about the length of your chapters. Chapter length is up to you. I hope this helps.

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I enjoyed it very much

This book is a very good read. I was hooked from start to finish. It needs some punctuation and grammar fixes, and some wrong words were used, and letters placed in the wrong place or left off, and several times the writer used the wrong name for a character, but the story was good enough to look past it while reading. I"m not huge on BDSM, but the plot of the story was too good to not continue reading. If there's more to the story, i hope to be able to read it when you get it out. Would love for you to check out my book some time, and let me know what you think. I definitely would recommend this book for others to read.

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