Kowhai Belle

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I'm a 26 year old mother of three and I love to read, write and draw 🎨

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ACE

*Slow effing clap*

Honestly, such an amazingly written story. Suspense, drama, sex, love, it has it all and left me wanting more every single chapter. All of the main and side characters were well-written, intriguing and had a purpose in the plot that didn't leave any loose ends once the story was completed.

The authors writing style was flawless and it was evident in each character POV that was written that she is very skilled and talented, you were able to see each character's distinct personality and characteristics in the way chapters were written and everything left a clear vision in your mind.

Can't wait for the next sequel, apart from FOB2 (another sequel of a book of this particular authors) I've never wanted to read something more

*slow effing clap*

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Wowzah!

Wow this story is riveting!
The characters are so well written and the scenes so well set that you’re practically walking in the story with them, feeling and living it with them! You have an amazing talent of painting pictures with your words.

There were so punctual and grammatical errors but nothing that disrupts the story too much and a few paragraphs could be broken up to create a better flow but otherwise your story is amazing and so will be waiting for the notifications letting me know you’ve updated!

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Colliding hearts

I loved the plot of this story, it wasn’t like many other stories I’ve read. It was refreshing not having an evil ex trying to sabotage the relationship and it dealt with many real issues without being corny but was also so sappy it was amazing 🤩

Weren’t many grammatical errors but some sentences were repetitive and felt unnecessarily added but otherwise technique was great and engaging and I finished the story in just over a day lol

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Superb!!

Such an amazing read!

Minimal punctuation and grammatical errors within the entire story.

Love how the author was able to seamlessly jump from the different characters points of view and then also switch between times, it could’ve been very confusing but it flowed nicely and the tone of the story was consistent.

The chapters and characters are engaging and the character show so much depth and development throughout the story, very complex but all fits together to tell an amazingly complex and interesting story.

Finished this story and it’s sequel well within twenty-four hours (couldn’t put them down) and now eagerly waiting for the next update!

Love your work!!

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Pleasantly surprised

I was pleasantly surprised by this story, it’s definitely not something I would usually choose to read but I’m glad that I did. The style of writing fitted well with looking through the eyes of a child, though sometimes it seemed a chapter lacked flow or jumped awkwardly, I was reminded that we’re seeing events through a child’s point of view and that thinking and perception is very different.

I haven’t finished reading the story yet but I am very much eager to continue and see where it goes 😁

Great job writer!

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Love not Included

I found this story lovely, It was engaging and the character well written, you really become immersed in it and how they feel throughout, some you love, others you hate and it makes the story great!

A few small grammatical errors but nothing that made the story difficult to read. :)

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Untie the Knot

This is by far one my favourite stories I’ve read on Inkitt. It’s funny, heartbreaking and the story is so cleverly done with little nods at the story of Hades and Persephone.
The style of writing was engaging and flowed together nicely, the only issue I have is that it ended ☺️

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The fighter and his tiger

I loved the character development for Elias in particular, from a closed off broken bad-boy I'm glad he found someone he could open up to despite being stand offish. I love how the two leads complimented each other and didn't try to make the other better but accepted them faults and all.

The story was riveting and I wasn't able to put it down until I finished it. Great read!

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Given Time

I really loved this story. The plot and storyline was great and technique and grammar kept me engaged from the beginning until the end. Love enemy turned lover stories, there's always so much passion stemming from the animosity that when it turns to affection it's powerful!
A great read, recommend it absolutely!!

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The Switch

This book had me cracking up so much! Was a hilarious tale of walking a mile in someone else's shoes and finding the healing they needed in themselves.

Plot and delivery was hilarious, was able invoke so many different emotions all at once.

Great read!

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Not all about you

The plot to this story is so rich and the dimensions to the characters, so deep.
Your writing technique is very good and I've only noticed a few instances where there's spelling and grammar mistakes, but overall it is very good :)
I am very keen to see Jace's character development and to see where the story goes, it's really got an element of mystery to it, there are so many paths it could take.
One of the best plots I've read on Inkitt so far and your writing style and technique only want me to read more and to see what your other stories are like :)
Look forward to more. Keep up the great work!

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His little fae

I have hardly put this story down for the last 2 days, it's is written superbly!! Update more 😁😁

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