LaughingFox

Twenty something, living life in the woods. Read, Write, Play ;D

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Good bones!

This story has good bones and a strong (albeit very aggressive) main character. The story feels a little rushed and could use a bit more detail. I have trouble following the main characters movements. Otherwise the story is entertaining.

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