Richard Khumalo

Capetown

I am a dreamer and i will never stop dreaming until my dreams become reality. I love writing and with each chapter i write i move closer to my self actualisation

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Neat

A mixture of crime and magic wow i have been looking for such a book for a long time ,I like it.Keep up the good work

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Dialogue

Your book is very interesting and this is a good beginning i have got to say. Why not try to seperate the dialogues for example

“Dad is mom going to be okay?” Charles said staring at his father who was crying

“She will be fine my boy everything will be alright” replied his father assuring him

It makes it easier for the reader to keep up with the dialogue you feel me. I am living your book so far. The prologue needs some corrections it terms of gramma it has got some errors but i love it because it captures the attention of the reader and makes him/her want to read more.

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Inetresting

The story is very unique i am a fan of werewolves so i know a lot about them but ive never come across something like this so i believe its original. I really love where the story is going and it shows a lot of potential to become something big. The story is very good However you must revisit your chapters and correct the grammar. Have you tried using grammarly try it. I love it❤️❤️❤️❤️

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I love it 💯%

Thiiiiiisssssss issssss aaaammmmmmaaaaazzzziiiinnnnnggggg please please i meed more 🥺🥺🥺

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Impressed

I am not a fan of adult novels but i have got to say i am very impressed. I have enjoyed reading this book to the extent that i am beginning to love adult novels keep up the hood work i love your writing OMG i wish i could use a voice note to express my satisfaction

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Sweet

Aaaaaaawwwwwweeeeessssssooooooooommmmmmmmmeeeeeeeee

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neat

I am loving your way of writing wow,its just out of this world

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Neat work

i'm not a very good writer but when i see great work i know it and this is neat work.I like your way of writing

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