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A story that has promise

The stories plot has overall promise. The grammar is some spots is good, some spots needs work. Please make notice of paragraph length. I have found in my own experience that you loose a reader’s attention if my paragraph is too long. And just be aware of your punctuation. Don’t over use commas. I like the characters dynamics. I’m looking forward to see why Myra is so off putting by Amey. And why Amey is so damaged by Myra’s lack of interest in him. Dude, not everyone has to like you lol

Story is overall promising. Keep it up

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Love wilted love

I started this story on Wattpad and fell hard for it. Author builds her characters well, has a strong plot, and keeps the drama strong throughout. When her female lead is feeling rather worn down, the reader knows it and there’s no question about it. Those are the markings of a good writer. Yes, I did notice a few errors here and there but nothing bad enough to stop me from reading it. This is a must read 🖤🖤

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Howling good read

This story was excellent! I think I finished it in 2 days, a must read

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Love

This is starting out to be an incredible story. I loved the first one. I can tell this one will be just as addictive

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Out of this world

Sci-fi s normally not my go to genre, but NoAnna has changed my mind. I love this story. I love her writing style and I love her character development. I love not knowing where she's taking me but most of all, I love how she incorporates all the folklore. You can tell she has taken a lot of time to research. I love that.

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Love love love

Yes I love this story!! Period!

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Love this story

Short and sweet review: I loved this on Wattpad and now I love it on Inkitt!

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Going to buy it

I’m buying this!!

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Holy hot hell

A must read! A well written, great character development, and dynamic! I’m living it

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Great story

I’m in love with this story! It’s late I wish I could say more but you know what they say, less is more.

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Great story

This was a wonderful story! I’m excited to read the others in the series

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Incredible story

I’m impressed by your storytelling. I’m impressed by your character development. Spot on 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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Howling good

Love love love this story! You’re incredible with plot, dialogue, twists! I mean it I am head over heels with this story

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Intriguing

Some extremely small grammatical errors but nothing that would stop me from reading further. I love it so far. The plot of awesome! I’m just not sure yet what kind of creature Vincent is yet. But that’s to be expected if he’s and she are mysteries. Just know I love the plot and characters so far!

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Loved this story

This was one of my favorites! It made me laugh, cry, want to toss my phone out my window, and then cry again. Lauren has a knack for bringing ones emotions out in the open. She has the beautiful ability to also show the humor in pain. How to restore faith in people. Fabulous story!

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Lovely story

This story is magnificent! I love the version the author tells. It’s similar but different.

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Bitten by the story

Overall the story is good. Strong plot, already infuriated by the political tyranny of the plot (in a good way), and excited to see where it goes. There are slight grammatical errors but nothing I can’t get around. So far, I’m liking what I’m reading

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Awesome start

I’m thrilled to read the beginning! Can’t wait for more

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Thrilling and creepy but oh so good

Hands down one of my favorites

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Absolutely dizzying

This is a work of a mad genius! I loved it!!

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Super story

I can’t get enough of this story. It offers so much more than any other vampire genre I’ve ever read!

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Love her work

I have been a fan of Julia’s work for quite some time and I am happy to see her enter this contest! The story is written well, presented with a cohesive plot, and she brings you in to the world she created and is very talented to keep you reading.

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Feeling Hot hot hawt

I’m reading this on Wattpad but I’ll be happy to give a review here bc this author deserves it. I love the characters she’s created. The boldness of Axel and the incessant fantasies of chloe is how can I say this - addiction causing. Keep it up ...😂😂

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Love this author and her stories

This author knows how to spin a tale. How to weave a plot and paint her characters. I love this story

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A sweet tale of a cat and their parent

This was overall a very sweet story on how having a pet could be as comforting and therapeutic as having a therapist, maybe more. Angel gave Louise a reason to go on again. Very sweet.

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Great story

I loved fighting Darius and I love this one too. It’s not the typical werewolf story and I love that. Some spots are grammatical incorrect but that’s not important to me. The story makes up for small errors

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Winning werewolf story

I love the character dynamics. I love the humor. It’s not the typical cliche alpha story. The author is talented in describing scenes. I love it

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Great story

There is nothing I dislike. I love how the author describes the characters so well that I can actually see them in my mind. I’m left with no questions who these people are and what they look like. I’m really enjoying it.

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