Lawrence Kinden

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More of a Synopsis

I love the idea of an alternate version of Harry Potter, but this reads more like a synopsis than a story. There's little description, little interaction, it's mostly just a synopsis of The Sorcerer's Stone with a hyper-competent Harry who doesn't talk to anyone.

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Wow!

I love the concept. I'm especially intrigued by the idea that the girls might be executed for their forbidden love even though they're protect by social status. It's an interesting tension. However, it's a bit more intense than I'm comfortable with, so I think I'll have to leave it after Chapter 2. This isn't meant to be a critique, it's just not for me.

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