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Hello and welcome to my writing nook. // Future Doctor of Medicine//Fantasy/Romance are my favorite genres. All in all an introverted NERDY bookworm burrito. D&D player XD

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Here be Dragons!!!! Love it XD

I loved the story, the world building and characters. The pace allows for a natural flow and we follow our protagonist's growth chapter per chapter, though unfortunately for me as of right now there are only 9, and I crave more. This is well written classical fantasy with a sheltered heroine pulled away from her horrendous home, and an adventure of her discovering the workings of the world she is a part of and a search for oneself and her place and standing in the world. I loved it, so keep the chapters coming author!!!! 😊🧑🧑🧑🧑

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Binge worthy.

I was turning pages like a loon. I enjoyed the book. The plot is great, very immersive and keeps you on your toes. Though to be honest I didn't like that the heroine did what she did before settling things in her relationship. But the suspense....It's great. Now if you excuse me I'll be over reading Book 2.
Great job!!!!πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™

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Potential!

The story needs a lot of editing. The plot is interesting, but no spacing makes it confusing a bit. With good editing I think this story would shine brilliantly. It's an interesting premise.
Good luck author :)))

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Great work!

The book is really impressive. Though it starts of a bit crammed with a lot of info dumping (though it was kind of necessary considering) the story develops beautifully from there on. The mix of history and myth is blended wonderfully, and the historical characters and legendary ones are brought to life splendidly. I loved princess Sbara . The amount of work and research that went into developing such an amazing story is really commendable. I truly enjoyed reading the book, great job author :)

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Amazing!

I read the current chapters and well, I got hooked from the first few paragraphs. I loved

Ariana and Erik both, though maybe there were a few too many mentions on him thinking how she is meek and docile, maybe a bit too naΓ―ve that seem a bit repetitive. The story has potential to truly be a great fantasy romance. The writing style is beautiful, There were just a few spelling mistakes here and there but the flow of the story is good, the pace on point. I couldn't find any major fault with it. I really enjoyed it and can't wait for more chapters, so keep them coming author you got yourself a fan! XD

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Enjoyable read!

SO, I had fun reading the story. For now it has 15 chapters, but so far it's interesting. I liked Liam for some reason more than our man Callum, since I found his character for some reason more appealing to me and better developed, though I'm not nixing our boy Cal just yet, we'll see how the story develops further. In the first chapters there are scenes that seem to flow a bit faster but in later chapters the pace is pretty consistent. A few things need to be tweaked that I mentioned in the comments but overall it is an interesting story. Good job author! 😊🧑

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Promising!

Okay, the story is in it's infancy but...I like the premisse of it! With a bit of polishing in a sense that some scenes need work pacing wise, and well I can't say much about character deapth from five chapters but I think the story has great potential!!! It's fairly entertaining and I would love to know where it will go from here, so on that note keep at it author!!!! Keep up the good work πŸ˜πŸ‘

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LOVE IT!

This is a beautuful story!!! It's simple and is beautifully depicted and done, but the theme that the story explores is far from simple. Bravo author! Like the other story I've read from this author the story explores character growth and the female MC dealing with a certain issue, which I bet a lot of people could have come in contact with. I loved our man Jax and the way he cared for Adeline, I loved the boys too. I really enjoyed reading this story!! Now on a more pressing note....I need more of your stories!!!! 😁🧑

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MORE!!!

OOOH, I love it so far!!! The tension and suspense is high from the start, and the action is well done and described so it immerses you fully into the scene and transports you onto the page. I can't wait to see how things unfold from here on out!!! How will they deal with the devastation of their pack and how will she deal with everything that will hapen in the next pack! GOOD JOB AUTHOR! Keep those chapters coming 😁🧑

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Oh, goodie!!! 😁

Okay, I love the story so far! The characters are interesting, both leads have huge egos, and their banter is fun. Our fae us a firecracker, who's git a mouth with a life of it's own, a bit impulsive, so I wonder how her growth as a character will go. Our man a proud dragon king has a temper to match. I'm interested to see how they burn together 😁As for the worldbuilding, from what I glimosed it's interesting, the plot is engaging and I can't wait to see what hapens next. Good job author!😊

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Need more XD

I loved the story!!! It hooks you in from the start, Mira is hilarious to me, and Azar is interesting in his own way.. The world building is interesting, I like it that they don't know much of how humans work and it's interesting to find out how she'll navigate as the story proceeds. The only reason I gave writing style a four is that a chapter or two might need a bit more show don't tell, other than that I really really enjoyed your storytelling!!!! I love the plot and can't wait to find out what happens next! XD Great job author!!!

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Interesting so far!

Okay, so the story so far has 7 chapters. I enjoyed it, and am interested to know where it goes from here and how will the relationship develop 😊 There are a few tweaks that could be made here and there but overall interesting. I'll keep an eye out fir more chapters 😊 Good wirk author, keep at it 😊

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Really Enjoyed it!!!!

Okay I had a lot of fun reading this story. It's character centric and we follow a girl who loves history and views the world through a historic lens. as she navigates a change in her family dynamic that forces her to be around an old friend with whom she doesn't really jive.. I loved the references and it made me learn a few things.... I loved August for being a sweetheart who looked at her as her and liked all her quirkiness. Really enjoyed the character exploration and her relationships with others in her life and the way everything resolved in the end at the conclusion of the story. Great job author!!!! 😊🧑🧑🧑🧑🧑

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Blood Stained

Ok I enjoyed the story! The plot twists were fun, the action keeps you on your toes, the ending had me like WHAT?! It's interesting, though I have to admit Quinn in some instances acted like a real brat. But the story continues and there is a lot of room for her to grow as a character. There are some small things that might need fixing but overall an entertaining read! Good job author 😁🧑

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Freaking interesting

Okay I greatly enjoyed the story.! The characters were fun, the plot twist's too. Daisy being a favorite, sorry Olive! It might need a bit of tweaking here and there but nothing major. I am very eager to find out how the story of the next gen will fare in this series!!!! Good Job!!!!🧑🧑🧑🧑😁😁😁

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Very interesting!!!!

I loved the story. The characters are very colorful (literally and metaphorically) and fun and the overall atmosphere reminds me of a comic book. I can't wait for the next installment XD

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LA principessa

I enjoyed the story. The plot is intriguing, Their relationship moved a bit fast and I would loved to see a bit more depth in Santino's characters but I really enjoyed reading the story, and will keep an eye out for more chapters. Good job author, keep those babies coming! 😁🧑

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Good start!

This story is still new, with only 7 ch for now but it has a interesting premise and I would stick around to see how all of it develops. Good job and keep up the good work author 😊🧑🧑🧑🧑

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A roller-coaster!

I enjoyed the story and the roller coaster of emotions it elicited. It's dark, brutal, fun and spicy....It delves in some heavy themes, and the author does a good job dealing with a number of different characters. The drama keeps you on your toes...a very interesting read. Great job author 🧑🧑🧑🧑😊πŸ₯°

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Impressive and so so Good!!!!

I read the currently available chapters and to say I loved the book would be an understatement. The plot is amazing! I read a lot of werewolf novels but this one sticks out so much and in a very good way. The world building is superb, the descriptions, the style of writing completely immerses you in the world and it feels as if you are sitting on the main characters shoulder through the whole ride, experiencing everything yourself. And the plot twists...so many of them to keep you hungering for more. Weaving mystery and romance throughout...the author has done a magnificent job, a true chefs kiss. I loved Isla as a character and Kai is such a sweetheart. Them as a team will be a force to reckon with. Can't wait for more of their story and actually from more stories to come from the author!!!!! I would recommend this book to all werewolf romance lovers, there is just so much to love about this story 🧑🧑🧑🧑🧑🧑🧑🧑
Good Job!!!

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When Moon and Sun fall in love

Well, this was so adorable and wholesome. Cute story and sweet enough to give you diabetes. Though the paragraphs need to be divided so it's easier to read and to space out the dialogue so the chapters are not just one big cluster. Overall good job 🧑😊

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Oh so so good!

To my anime and manga loving ass, this wonderful, intricate world hooked me in from the first page. The story is ongoing but the first five chapters are so good. I can't wait for more!!!! Keep them coming author you are indeed very talented XD Love it!!!

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I love, love, love it!

I loved this book. It's about six chapters in but I was hooked from the first one. The plot is really interesting and it leaves you with a ton of questions and just grabs your attention. Keep up the good work, I'll stay tuned for more XDDD

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Dark and intriguing

I enjoyed this piece. The prose is beautiful, rich and oh so colorful. The characters are captivating and so deliciously dark, i loved them. The twists and turns of this story just pushes you to read further. The author style of storytelling is really interesting....I loved this story.

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Very interesting with great potential

I liked the story being told from the murderers perspective, though i would like it if it was a bit longer because you could really delve deeper into her psyche, for us to really immerse in a mind like that. It could use a bit of editing and maybe scratch the flashbacks in the middle of the chapters, just let it flow with her telling the story while she is in her cell. Overall with a bit of touch up it'll be a great psychological thriller, good job :)

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Potential

Ok, I had fun reading the story, but it need a lot of editing. At times it was hard to follow, in later chapters it got better. The characters are fun but need a bit more developing, backstory vise. The plot is fun enough and makes you want to know more of what is to come. Keep up the good work :)❀😁

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Very interesting read!!!!

I have read the 14 chapters so far and I got to say I'll need more. It's a interesting plot and I will continue to read to discover what happens next! There is a mistake in two chapters i think but it's really small, he already told her he has siblings, but she was surprised about the information again in next chapter.
Overall good job XD 😁❀

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Fun spicy read.

Well, this book might be a bit too 🌢🌢🌢🌢🌢🌢 for me but I enjoyed it. The sex scenes weren't awkward, they flowed nicely and the underlying plot keeps you reading. So overall a very fun read, I'm off to the next installment. XD
Good job author and keep steaming up our reading glasses, thank you πŸ˜πŸ‘

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Great read!

If you like badass, straightforward, strong female protagonist this is a book for you! Our siren Aster is all that and then some. The plot has twists and turns, it's intriguing and thrilling. The worldbuilding and lore are interesting. Great job author I enjoyed the chapters so far and I'm on a lookout for more., keep them coming, you've got yourself a fan! XDπŸ‘πŸ˜β€

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Fun read.

Though I'm not a fan of insta love (that's just my own preference) I had fun reading this book. I like the pairing of morally gray guys with an innocent, naΓ―ve, sheltered girl but the characters would need a bit more developing. There are some structural mistakes in sentences and somethings kept repeating that would have to be revised and edited, but anyhow I enjoyed reading the story.
Keep at it author and all the best luck πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

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Loved It!

I enjoyed the story so far so much! The plot is very interesting and so are the characters. Love the writing style. I'm waiting for more chapters. :)))
Keep up the great work! β€β€β€β€πŸ˜πŸ‘

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I love the story

I like the premise of the story. The relationship between Soren and Luna is so sweet. The pacing of the story is good. I'm gonna need more chapters author! ❀❀❀❀❀

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Rose

I enjoyed the story. It is quite engaging, it keeps your interest. I liked Rose, though Damien's character confused me a bit,, But overall i really enjoyed the plot. There are some grammar issues but those can be easily fixed and didn't deter me from continuing to read.
Anyway I liked it! Good work author! β€πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ’•

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Good work :)

I like the plot and the characters, though I was a bit confused at who is who at the beginning. The story has a lot of potential, but will need editing. Keep up the good work author πŸ˜Šβ€πŸ‘πŸ˜

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