LesAnne

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Awesome Read

I've never come across a plot like this, and I like its originality. At first, the title gave me the impression that the story is about friends making bets, but I've been proven wrong. I like the personality of the female main character, how evident her strengths and weaknesses are. She's become well-developed by the end of the story. As for the guys involved in The Games, save for Gio, I had a hard choosing who I wanted best for Thera. The story is engaging, and has enough hook

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Poignant

The blurb alone got me hooked. The story is intriguing and evocative. Despite the few typos, the writing style is effective and unique. Though I disliked stories that jump back and forth, this one I didn't mind. I even found myself looking forward to those 'moments'. I like Grace, her character is relatable. She made me fall in love with Spence too. In the grand scheme of things, it made sense why didn't end up together. In the end, I like that they hadn't gotten back together because my heart would break for Spence a little more. Great story!

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