Lev

Bergen

I am known as Lev, Levy, and Levi. Mostly going by Lev. In too many fandoms to name and writes in a lot of genres. From fanfic to original fiction. Second account: ElenaValentin.

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Recommended!

This story has a gripping main character (Kat Donovan). The author is capable of bringing Kat's unique voice to life and her view of the world in the first chapter alone. Introducing believable side characters and setting which is difficult enough on its own. Its good story structure and pacing in the story Made In Hell.

I would advise, however, to look over once more with editing, there are small editing mistakes here and there. And some sentences could've been cut shorter. Other than that, the story reads smoothly and is an intriguing read.

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Very interesting!

It has a strong female character and it shows easily through the first-person view in the story. The chapters have great hooks and cliffhangers. Where I think it can improve is grammar wise (which can be easily fixed through some more deep editing). And take some time to properly pace the descriptions and wove them into the story more naturally. Apart from that, it has a great potential to become an even better story.

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