Lev

Bergen

Hola! I’m Lev, from Mexico and Norway. A writer of BL and many other genres.

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Very interesting!

It has a strong female character and it shows easily through the first-person view in the story. The chapters have great hooks and cliffhangers. Where I think it can improve is grammar wise (which can be easily fixed through some more deep editing). And take some time to properly pace the descriptions and wove them into the story more naturally. Apart from that, it has a great potential to become an even better story.

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