Leyana321

A girl who's into both writing and reading is what you could just describe me. Stories on Romance, adventure, werewolves, erotica๐Ÿ˜œ and fantasy are my favorite. Hope y'all could check out my stories๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜

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Fantastic

I'm so into this book. It's super fantastic๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ, just sad the chapters are too short.
If you work on the spacing and description well, it would be way pass super fantastic.
Frankly speaking, your storyline is very very amazing.๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜Š
I'll really be expecting more please..
All in all, continue writing fellow writer.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿค—โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š

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Amazinggggg

This story is indeed amazing. I love the suspense too and how you elaborated their feelings. ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ
Also I'm really sorry for the late review๐Ÿ˜‘
All in all, keep on writing fellow writer.
I'll really be expecting more pleaseeeee

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Fucking Wow

This is amazingggggggg...
Punctuation, check
Grammer, check
Expression, check
Spacing, check
Everything here is amazing especially the suspense. It's like you know what you're writing. You're sooooo on point
Keep writing fellow writer๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†โ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

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Amazing

So....I loved it
It's really amazing but I think if you really take your time to describe the person's feeling, the plot and the character's description, it's gonna be perfect
It's like you were rushing a little but to get to the amazing parts forgetting about how the characters feel.
For example how he felt when they met and how she felt when they met... Did he find her attractive?. Did she like his looks?.
Expression of feelings and the description of surroundings will make this book really perfect.
All in all, I loved it.... I'll be expecting more โ™ฅ๏ธ

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Amethyst of the forest

This story is really amazing. It has a lot of potential. A little work on punctuations, Grammer and the use of tenses will make it really nice.
The plot is really really interesting. Also, if you could elaborate each chapter vert well it'll be absolutely perfect. I mean the description of the characters, setting and other stuffs...
All in all, I love it
Continue writing, fellow writer ๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŒ 

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Weirdly amazing

This is....I mean I'm speechless. This story is really amazing. I kinda didn't understand all but it was superb. If paragraphing and few errors are excluded, everything else is fantastic ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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Wow

This story is really amazing.
Jay seems like a bad ass guyโ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜‹
I love the suspense. It makes you wanna know what will happen next
Keep writing fellow writer๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜โ™ฅ๏ธ

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Interesting

The story is good๐Ÿค—
But I think if you work on the spacing, Grammer and punctuations,it would be perfect.๐Ÿ˜‰
I know we all ain't perfect but we can still advice each other...right?๐Ÿ™‚
All in all, keep writing fellow writer and I'll be expecting moreโ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Ama~zing

Okay....so I'm really not good at writing reviews but I just can't skip this book without writing one...lol๐Ÿ˜€
I love it... it's really amazing
How you described the characters and how you expressed their feelings...
Keep it up
I'll be waiting for more๐Ÿ˜‰โ™ฅ๏ธ

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Amazing...

Hmmm.. I don't even know what to say.
You wrote this story with a lot of emotions.
I love it๐Ÿ˜
Not to talk about Francine's character๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿ˜.
She seemed to be strong outside but deep down She's soft. So far, I didn't even notice any grammatical error. ๐Ÿ˜€
Good punctuations too...
This is amazing๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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