Liz Delgado Bello

New York

Wattpad writer “LizDelgadoBello”

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Good Job

Since there are only two chapters I can't really rate the plot of the story fairly however I like the story direction and where its going and how its not your average boy meets girl story, technically.

You use the word 'since' a lot. You can use words like; already, until now, after-all, as, considering, words along those lines. I can visualize what Belle is doing and whats happening. Good job on describing the person, or place and I personally like that however I think you should use more words in your phrases. You have a lot of short sentences.

I also like the mystery of Kameron's mission or 'goal'. I'll defiantly be waiting for the up coming chapters. So good luck and keep up the good work.

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