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I create countless gateways, Only those brave enough, As well as kinda bored, May seek out to hold the treasure of NULL!

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I thought it was a swell time.

I thought the storyline was genuinely based in something interesting and different. But I also had a hard time understanding broken or misplaced sentences in the story. I loved the stuff about the dog and it’s relationship towards the girl. But I wish I could have gotten an outside perspective. Maybe something from the parents, they don’t have to be oblivious to everything because horror. Make it subvert the genera in a cooler way is all! Sorry I couldn’t do a better opinion but it’s the holidays and I’m giving you what I genuinely think only this once. TAKE IT OR LEAVE IT AS I WOULD SAY!!!

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I Liked It For The Most Part

I thought it was an interesting idea, just personally; ive seen way too many horror/romance projects! I like the concept you have, with the kid worrying so much that he's gonna get himself into something serious. But on another note, I've seen this sorta stuff floating around everywhere! All and all, its a great story; just not for me.

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This, is what we should be looking for!

I seriously can’t believe, that the pages contained in this novel. Are not found to be the Bible in and of itself!

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Wonderful atmosphere

I love the atmosphere you present, it sort of reminds me of High school D&D not sure of what your actually going for! But regardless it’s great!

Keep up the good work!!
I would personally recommend this to anime horror lovers! As it seems to fit there demographic.

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Love the idea lol

Look I wanna see if giving my own books good reviews will help any. Anyway this book is hilariously dark I hope you other will say then same when I ad more

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I wrote a review about my own book Just to see what happened

I like that it exists and that I spent a decent amount of time on it. I love that I actually have an original yet meh story to tell

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