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It's a slow death to not live passionately

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A very interesting story!

The Fire Seal is a very interesting story. It starts with Dialla, a young girl who discovers her magical abilities and transforms into a sorceress. She spends the story learning about magic and embarking into dangerous territories she didn't believe she'd ever face.
The plot of the story is incredibly interesting, with a good storyline, but the story can be a bit slow at times, with most fight scenes in the very beginning or very end, not many scattered throughout the story. The ones that are inside the story, though, are written perfectly, the author using detail and emotions that describe the scenes fantastically. Many scenes revolve around romance, which is great had that been what the story supposedly entailed. Instead of the magic powers and sorcery and the Fire Seal in which the story is named after, there are many scenes that are simply about Dialla and Dimitri's romance that sometimes you forget the story is actually about magic.
Overall, this story is really amazing and the author has a talent when it comes to the power of description like the fight scenes. Great job!

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Really cool!

This isn't generally a story I'd read, but the chapters I've read so far were really really interesting. I like it a lot, and I'm going to continue to read.

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