Luna13Moon

I’m a young writer, who dreams of publishing one of my books one day. I write many genres and I hope to get more feedback on my books. Collab profile: Luna13MoonAndMaggie.

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Very Interesting

The plot was very interesting. I will say that you do need to work on capitalizing your sentences. I also like how you left the ending open where you can continue the book or even make a second book.

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Amazing

I loved the plot. It was very different from other books.

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Crazy

Your concept for this book is so much different than anything I have ever read. It is full of plot twists and questions. Overall it is a very good book.

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Amazing

I love the book. It was exciting and some thing very different then any book I have ever read.

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Amazing

This book was amazing over all.

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I loved the book.

The plot was amazing.

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Amazing

I loved the plot.

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Great

I love the book.

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Amazing

I love the plot line.

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Very good

This was a really good book

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Great book

I love the plot line but there was a lot of grammar mistakes that made it a little hard to read.

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Beautiful

I love the word choice. This has a deep meaning and that was something I love see in poetry. Overall, the whole thing is very well done.

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