LynnSilver16

Best Story Ever

The story in general is very good, I like the plot and it's interesting. The characters are funny and it's fun to see the development between characters. The way you describe the characters pain really got me the feelings, it's amazing. So thank you for the tears, but of course there would be some negative. I really like this story, however I do want the author to bring back some of the characters. Because Julia's ex just disappear when she got rejected and Kris starts to feel distance from Alex. ALSO this book isn't finish yet, so who knows what might happen. As for the grammar, there were indeed some grammar mistakes, but I'm sure the book isn't edited yet cause the story isn't finish. Not that biggie, but overall it's a really good book! Five stars all the way pal.

When The Ice Melts

First, it's an amazing story that I've read. Second, it's NOT just interesting, or good, it's just the way the author wrote this book. It keeps you going, I've never stopped or took a break from it, I just kept reading because it was written with so much care and desire. Best Story Ever!

Awakening

The story is good so far, I'm looking forward to see what will happened next. The characters seems interesting but I suggest you to add some 'feelings' to the characters. Like more emotion, I think it would be interesting to read what's going on in their mind. But seriously, it's good so far. Just keep up with your good work!

Love or Lust

It's interesting right now, even though there are 3 chapters out. I really like it so far, so I'm going to wait for the next one.

GANGSTA

The introduction from the main character Ruby, is unique from other stories I've read before. It's funny and the author did really good on the introduction because it's really interesting and want the reader to keep on reading.

You Stole My Breath

Because it’s interesting and I’m think I’ll continue it.