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M.C. Rivera

Tampa

Part 3 of My Wife's Desires is available!

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Interesting

The idea is really interesting. A little rewrite to help polish it up would go a long way. The main character Salice is relatable because being selfish, despite it making others unhappy, is the only way to make YOU happy and sometimes there are sacrifices. Only on Chapter 7 but really looking forward to where this story is headed.

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Broken ties

Your idea is good but it's difficult to read. It is long winded and there are numerous grammar errors. IE: "More fresher, more clearer, more darker." the very first sentence. Long winded means the run-on sentences and details that don't help the story. Sometimes less is more.

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