MarkCY39

Hi I'm Mark, I use he/him pronouns and I'm Pansexual. I'm thinking about starting a story soon! what do you guys think?

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Sissy Boy

I really love this book... I, like the rest of the fans, would love to see more but as a writer know that it's is not always possible to finish something. I love Blake's character and understand why Ash is afraid of losing him... I feel like Blake needs to explain why he loves Ash and I feel like Ash actually need to say what he is thinking more, but it's part of who they are as characters not to do so, so I understand. I feel like a lot of Ash's thoughts repeat themselves and there is a lot of repetitive wording but overall the story is amazing!! I love the writing style and I'm glad I happened to find this, amazing work!!

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Poisoned Light

The story is incredible! Your writing style is incredible but there were some parts where too much detail was thrown in at once or everything got confusing and certain things were forgotten or mixed up. Overall, really good but I would just suggest going through and editing some things. Also, it would be really cool if you wrote another one so we could see what Michael and Jack and Oliver's lives are like in the future! Thank you so much for this wonderful story!

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Oh Brother...

I love this story. The character development is incredible, the relationship between Gray and Win is sweet enough but is also spicy enough that you comeback wanting more. Bell_C's writing style is wonderful. i hoe that anyone who comes across this like i did, loves this as much as i do!

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