Hello Christion. Okay, I think Supervillain is a great story, which has the potential to expand to become a novel or novella. A story of a man's ambition to rule over humankind, and the consequence of achieving dominion and maintaining it.
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The main character is a tyrant, yet with a heart of gold. A broken soul who transforms negativity into positivity, and creates a world the world has always wished to live in. Yet; the New World Order is in the control of this one man, and his mortality will allow any number of scenarios to manifest once his reign has come to an end, as it is with all those who reach the pinnacles of power.
Great! Very well written, apart from a few paragraphs that could use a little tidying up. I offer an edit for the first paragraph of chapter four;
All who envied the man, hated him, and feared he would do more harm than good in the world, devised a plan to take him down. They failed, each and every time.
Thanks for writing, Christion!