Martin Sharratt

Finland

Unlovable lover of humankind.

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91 days

Hello Moi Moi.

I don't know how to delete reviews, so I have removed the text in the one I wrote for you. Perhaps you are able to delete it? I don't write reviews for work I have not appreciated, so I have given five stars for all aspects of your writing, since to offer less would seem unfair without an explanation.

I hope you will be inspired, stay safe, and live a good, happy life!

Martin Sharratt

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RE-START THE WORLD

Hello Kenneth.

I don't know how to delete reviews, so I have removed the text in the one I wrote for you. Perhaps you are able to delete it? I don't write reviews for work I have not appreciated, so I have given five stars for all aspects of your writing, since to offer less would seem unfair without an explanation.

I hope you will be inspired, stay safe, and live a good, happy life!

Martin Sharratt

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Supervillain

Hello Christion. Okay, I think Supervillain is a great story, which has the potential to expand to become a novel or novella. A story of a man's ambition to rule over humankind, and the consequence of achieving dominion and maintaining it.

The main character is a tyrant, yet with a heart of gold. A broken soul who transforms negativity into positivity, and creates a world the world has always wished to live in. Yet; the New World Order is in the control of this one man, and his mortality will allow any number of scenarios to manifest once his reign has come to an end, as it is with all those who reach the pinnacles of power.

Great! Very well written, apart from a few paragraphs that could use a little tidying up. I offer an edit for the first paragraph of chapter four;

All who envied the man, hated him, and feared he would do more harm than good in the world, devised a plan to take him down. They failed, each and every time.

Thanks for writing, Christion!

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Darkness

Hello Moon Knight.

I don't know how to delete reviews, so I have removed the text in the one I wrote for you. Perhaps you are able to delete it? I don't write reviews for work I have not appreciated in some way, so I have given five stars for all aspects, since to offer less would seem unfair without an explanation.

I hope you will be inspired, stay safe, and live a good, happy life!

Martin Sharratt

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Funky Funkle

Great story, Heather! Pleasingly human. The accidental breaks in the paragraphs interrupt the flow. Good if you can sort them out.

Wondering whether you should give away so much at the very beginning, though?

Thanks for writing

Martin Sharratt

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