Ivette

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Nice Job

I like the way you write, there's not to much to write about a plot because it's only a chapter. overall it's good. if you have a chance please check out mine. "Beyond the Deep Water." and give me a feedback.

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Original

This story is very original and intriguing, it keeps you connected at all times. Very well put together and thought through. The style is captivating and intriguing.

The author has done a really good job creating something that will attract the reader's attention.

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Very Nice Story

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I am moved

This story is soo beautiful it made my heart throb with emotions! Very well done!

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:)

very nice story so far, I like the flow and mood of it.I will wait too see what happens next :)

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You need to write more!!

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Perfect

Loved it! simply loved it!!!

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