MasonWind

Atlantis

Writing a dream.

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I Am Alpha

Good story, moves quickly, nice love story that develops between Cole and Sam - felt like the last chapter should have more of a moment before their mutual realization but it works as a cliff hanger to get me to read the second book (e.g. what do Leah and Stan think are they going to be honest about what's really going on?). First couple of chapters had no paragraphs - so they got easier to read. There are a number of grammar issues that make it harder to read. - frequently used words like at the beginning everyone is screaming, Your/You're - but those are easy to fix. The story is readable and characters likable so you want to keep reading to find out what happens next. Looking forward to your next book!

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