Matt_Darrow

Torrance, California, USA

Hello! I am a 38-year-old writer. I've worked many jobs but have succeeded in completing some fictional material in the last few years.

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Review of Bifrost

Nice writing! I enjoy Science Fiction. This story has a good pace to the language, otherwise known as creative momentum. The characters are human despite the highly developed technological setting. It would be engaging to read a second section or chapter. Well done! Sincerely, Matt_Darrow.

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Review of Hell's Laughter

This one reminds me of the 1800's writer named Ambrose (Bitter) Bierce also Edgar Poe. The story has a consistent point of view that is creative. The series of events or observations by the protagonist are disturbing to say the least. Maybe some before and after observations may add depth. What does the afterlife look like? I don't know I'm just asking. Continue writing. Great job! Sincerely Matt_Darrow.

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Review for The Crystal Skull Infinity

Nice perspective! I've seen a lot about crystal skulls from Latin America in the last few years. The use of the character that is a genie (djinn) is very cool. Keep up the good work. Sincerely, Matt_Darrow.

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