Meema

For those who like Percy Jackson

The story was nice and fun to read, the action, adventure, and fun elements made the book very special, giving off Percy Jackson vibes. One thing that bothered me was it felt like the story started right in the middle like I was missing something so I think you can work on that. The writing style was perfect, from adults to children, anyone could read this book. 10/10

Story Like a Movie

You really did the good job writing this story, apart from some scenes, you perfectly mastered the art of show don't tell because u could literally picture what you had written. Brilliant really. The story is good too and keeps you hooked until the end of every chapter.

Intriguing and Original

I loved the way the story is written, it gives the perfect tone and character voice as you'd expect from a demon, witty but scary. Gives an insight the story and his appearance naturally which is a very good skill in the writing world. Thoroughly enjoyed it and can't wait to read more