Miranda_Rider

"Writing, to me, is simply thinking through my fingers"

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Influenced Review

This was definitely a story that I loved from the moment I started reading it to the moment I finished reading the chapters that had been uploaded so far. One of my favorite things if not favorite things is the love and car Tessa has towards Noah. Throughout the story, the moment that stuck in my head is when Tessa offered to toss some of her stuff so Noah, who brought a second backpack filled with his stuffed animals that he was supposed to bring, could keep them. It was such a sweet moment between the two that I absolutely loved. My only issue with the story, which really isn't a big deal, is that there would be some super strong and effective moments in the story, and instead of a swear word, it was a PG version (Freaking in place of fucking). It totally could be a personal preference but I just think it would add to the story if you used the swear because, without it, I feel it takes the reader away from the story. Other than that, it's an excellent story that I'm sure will get better as the chapters go on!

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Exit Sign Review

I wasn't planning on reading your book, but when I went to your page it felt as if something was almost pulling me towards it. I was not disappointed in the slightest. I don't normally read books of this style simpl]y because they've never quite intrigued me but you managed to do it with Exit Sign. The description is amazing a perfect balance; not too detailed to where it pulls me away from the story but just enough to where I get a complete feel from the scene. I felt all the characters were given the perfect level of characterization where you were given just enough to figure some parts of the character out for yourself. Once I got over the fact that the stories weren't grouped together in the traditional story arc, I was able to appreciate this novel for what it is. This style definitely isn't for everyone I give it that, but you've done a fantastic job with it! Kudos to you :)

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Sange Review

This was an amazing read and I was so happy I can across you as a writer! The description used throughout these chapters is astounding which shows a great attention to detail! That being said, I believe it also slowed you I'm the sense that sometimes the description was so intense that I'd get so caught in the descriptions that I'd lose sight of what the story was truly about and what was going. I think, then again you don't have to take this tip, if you balanced out the descriptions and made them less intense in moments of high action in the story it would make the story all the better. Other than that this was a fantastic read and I can't wait to see where this story goes :)

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Indiviuduals Toxic Behavior Review

I want to start off this review by stating that this is such a creative and heinous idea for a story. It's definitely one of the few, if not the original idea for this type of idea for a book! With that, I absolutely loved the plot. Though Kevin was a complete sadistic asshole at parts, I found myself rooting for him at times. The issue, for me anyway, comes with the grammar of the story and different ways. For example, I loved that you switched points of view between the main character, Kevin, and Leo but I thought it was done a little too frequently. It took action away from the tense parts of the story and at times, repeat the same information over again just from a different character's point of view. The grammar, though it's not major grammar mistakes, happen in clusters of the story which took me away from what was going on.

With this story being such an ingenious idea and something truly creative and amazing, I think if you edited the grammar mistakes and changed the POV's less frequently, it would make the story even better than it already is! I loved reading this story and can't wait to see where it continues (or if a sequel happens?) :)

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My Possessive Mate...

Though this was a short chapter, I"m already in love with this book! I don't quite know what it is about this but all the characters just seem to mesh well together, especially the dynamic between the sisters. I do have to say that the dad seems to be my favorite character by far and to be honest, I'm not quite sure why yet. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but the story's only just begun so don't worry about that stuff yet. I can't wait till another chapter is uploaded!

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The Blind Girl Review

This is without a doubt story I don't think I've ever read before and If I have its been a very long time! The plot is so unique and unlike anything I've read. I love that as you read through the chapters, the mystery keep building and you never know what to expect. My only thing about this piece as that throughout the chapters, there would be misplaced/misspelled words that would throw the rhythm of the story off and make you stop and wonder what exactly was going on. Other than that the story was amazing and it leaves me wondering where it's going to go from here!

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I Will Find You Review (So Far)

After reading the chapters that you have uploaded so far, I have to say this book was definitely made for a person like me! I really like how all the different genres (thriller, drama, romance) are all mixed in pretty well and they seem to coincide with each other amazingly! I love the relationship between Maddison and Jay, I think it's well developed and the tension that was written between the two of them is great! My only issue with Jay and Maddison is that at times, the interactions between the two of them seem a little repetitive (they're at odds, they're friends, they have a moment, they're friends, then they go back to being at odds etc.) I understand that that's mainly because of how the storyline is written and what their past relationship is but I just think a little variation in between or having their 'stages' last a little longer would break up the monotony a little! Other than that, I think it's a fantastic story and I truly can't wait to see where you go from here!

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A Thorn Needs Its Rose Review

From the chapters you have uploaded so far for this story I absolutely love them! Every time I see the notification come in that you've uploaded a new chapter, I find myself rushing to read the next chapter because I desperately want to know what happens! I love how all the characters seem to interact with each other. You make it seem like they've known each other for so long when in fact it hasn't been, which in your case is a good thing. There's only one thing that I have a comment about with this story. I've read the story bio and in the end, I'm assuming Julian and the Main character are supposed to get together. I don't know how many chapters you plan on posting for this story but it seems to be moving rather slow. Here we are on chapter 10 and the main character and Julian haven't truly had a real conversation yet. Like I said, I don't know how many chapters you plan on uploading for this, but I wish the pace would pick up just a bit, even if there are lots of chapters to come. Other than that, I loved this story and can't wait to see where you go with it from here!

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Lifeline Review

I'm not the type of reader that reads poetry, mainly because it's not usually my go-to but I truly enjoyed this book! It's obvious that as you read through the various poems in the book and the author (you) have a knack and talent for writing poetry, which is a hard thing to come by these days. That being said, there's only one thing I have to comment about. I read in another review someone left that they believe more rhythm would make your great poems better and I agree with that! That goes in hand with my thing. Some of the poems, for my taste anyway, were a little lengthy. I think with a little more rhythm in the poems a little shorter of a length, it could make this book and all of the poems ever more amazing! Other than that I loved spending the time to read these poems and can't wait to see what work you do in the future! :)

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Showing You Love Review

This was such a refreshing story to read! I consider myself an avid reader of books and I don't think I've ever read a story like this one! The characterization of Cupid to me is spot on and is interesting. I've never thought about what cupid might look like if he was human but after reading this I feel that his description is on point! The only critique I have is on the main character. I love her and I see that you were writing her to make her strong and able to defend herself, which is refreshing to read the main character strong for herself and wanting to prove people wrong. My only thing about it is that I think she's a little too strong if that makes sense. She comes across as, excuse my language, but a bitch and not in a good way. It almost turns the reader away because of how abrasive she seems to be at almost everything. I'm not saying you have to change her character, but give her some sort of "softness" that readers can see within her that makes her seem a little less harsh. Other than that, I loved this story! Once again, it was a refreshing read and I'm glad I came across you and this read in the forums :)

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Intruder Inside My Soul Review

This book had me completely sucked in from the beginning! You took such a basic story idea (girl going home to an abusive boyfriend) and gave it such a unique twist that I didn't realize what I was reading! The fact that this is all set in a biker, Sons of Anarchy esque world adds a depth to the story that really brings it out! My only complaint for this story is that there isn't enough of the gang in there. Every character is either a part of it or has some Connection to them. Even if it were just small little details about what they do it would make the story all the more better! Other than that,I have no other complaints! Really can't wait to see where this story goes from this point on!!!

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Perfectly Me Review

I want to start of this review by saying this book was a treat to read! It started out so uniquely from the books I've read on here in way that you catch the readers up to speed on the main characters life through memories. It's an interesting way to tell the characters back story without getting boring which isn't any easy task to accomplishment!

With that being said I do have two notes. One, I found it difficult throughout the story to keep off the different characters and who they were towards the main character. I would lose track of what character did what, who was friends with who at the moment etc. Another thing is that I was confused on the timeline of the characters. What I mean by that is that though you said the characters were only in fifth and sixth grade, how they were acting and what they were doing reminded me of how high schoolers would act.

Other than that,this story was great and I can't wait to see where you go with this story moving forward :)

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Alpha of Glass Review (So far)

I've only read the first few chapters but I already really like this story. It takes the typical shape shifter story and puts an unique spin on it! I love the interactions between Kiernan and Jason. They remind me of how two brothers who have been best friends their entire lives would act,which adds an element of reality that everyone can relate to. I'm really excited to see where this story goes from here and I look forward to finishing it off :)

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Alpha of Glass Review (So far)

I've only read the first few chapters but I already really like this story. It takes the typical shape shifter story and puts an unique spin on it! I love the interactions between Kiernan and Jason. They remind me of how two brothers who have been best friends their entire lives would act,which adds an element of reality that everyone can relate to. I'm really excited to see where this story goes from here and I look forward to finishing it off :)

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Let It Be Review

Let me start off this review by saying that I loved reading this story! I was sad to see that only one chapter was uploaded so far. It definitely had me wishing that there was more to the story! I really liked the idea and the plot that you've set up for the story. Though I haven't read many werewolf alpha stories, this plot does seem unique to me in the fact that even though the alpha has his sights set on one girl (Camilla), there's still the opportunity for other characters shine through what you have set up. The only thing I have to critique is that I felt the POV had switched too many times throughout the story. It was hard to keep track of not only what was going on because of the switches, but occasionally where it was stated whose point of view it was, it looked like the rest of the text which confused me a little bit more. All in all, I really enjoyed this story and can't wait to not only see what you do with it in upcoming chapters, but I can't wait to read those chapters as well :)

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Constant Faith... Review

Let me start off by saying I absolutely LOVED this story! The amount of detail given to not only the individual words but the sentences and the story as a whole is amazing! My only complaint, and believe me when I say this is a good complaint, that sometimes I felt you were almost too descriptive with your words. Some of the sentences and words you used were so complex, that it took me away from the story because I had to actually think about what they meant or look them up. Other than that, I really enjoyed this book and can't wait to read more of your writing in the near future! :)

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First Chapter Review

For a short story, this is excellent work! It's a great length, which makes up for the fact that it is a short story. I was given enough text to fully immerse myself in the world that you've created. The concept for this book is unique and has potential, it can be great if done well. There were only a few things I didn't like/confused me. When you wrote things in the other language, even though you clarified what it meant in English in parenthesis, I was still confused about what language it was exactly. I personally think it needs to be either elaborated further as to not confuse readers, or gotten rid of so it doesn't confuse readers. The only other thing I had an issue with was their culture was really explained, which made me confused on where this story was exactly taken place. Other than that, I think this is an excellent beginning to a short story compilation and I'm excited to see where you go with it from here :)

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Just One Favor Review

First off, I want to say that I really like this story! The characters interact really well with each other (A particular favorite of mine being Teagan and Avery). You have such a strong voice that comes through at various parts of the story that give Just One Favor a whole another light! There are a few grammatical errors such as words being misspelled and misplacement of words but that's not a huge issue. One other comment I had was that I thought the whole beginning situation with Layton and Avery is a little sketchy. Yes, I know that he doesn't tell her any of these details on why she needs to babysit for him but it's a weird idea because I know personally, I wouldn't babysit for someone I barely talked to, or knew little to no details of why I was babysitting. Other than that this story is fantastic and I can't wait to see where you go with it from here :)

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