Indiviuduals Toxic Behavior Review
I want to start off this review by stating that this is such a creative and heinous idea for a story. It's definitely one of the few, if not the original idea for this type of idea for a book! With that, I absolutely loved the plot. Though Kevin was a complete sadistic asshole at parts, I found myself rooting for him at times. The issue, for me anyway, comes with the grammar of the story and different ways. For example, I loved that you switched points of view between the main character, Kevin, and Leo but I thought it was done a little too frequently. It took action away from the tense parts of the story and at times, repeat the same information over again just from a different character's point of view. The grammar, though it's not major grammar mistakes, happen in clusters of the story which took me away from what was going on.
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With this story being such an ingenious idea and something truly creative and amazing, I think if you edited the grammar mistakes and changed the POV's less frequently, it would make the story even better than it already is! I loved reading this story and can't wait to see where it continues (or if a sequel happens?) :)