MonyaR

Hey everyone! I'm Monya but you all can call me Mo. I am a budding author with big (and sometimes odd) imagination.

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Jellypuff Jake

The protagonist is kinda for my liking but overall I think this has the bearings of a nice story. I don't normally see much interracial books like this but it is a breath of fresh air to see.

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Beauty and the Beasts

Smooth Rides is a story about Beauty trying to survive a threat trying to kill her and her own love life. Beauty's character is a very typical strong and feisty leading woman. However the author uses this as a base to build Beauty's character. In key moments littered around this novel it is shown that she has a more vulnerable side of her. I do wish to point out that there is a bit of melodrama that occurs.

Additionally, there's a sort of sudden emotional changes that happen to Beauty which can be confusing at times. It was like skipping the middle of a plot. I feel like there should have been more build up.

Writing wise, I enjoyed your style. There is a bit of run on sentences specifically in first chapter. The sentence in question was her describing her lip gloss.

Overall this story has potential and I look forward to see how it goes.

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Sarah is Queen and Max is Iconic

I will start of by saying that I love the two main characters. Sarah is so well rounded. She still has her girly side and fully embraces it while also having an independence to her in which I enjoy. Max gives me 'screw gender roles' type of feel which I really hope to see more of. This story could just be collections of Max and Sarah growning up and it still would be gold. I look forward for more.

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Pretty Cool

I did enjoy the setting. I don't normally see books set in prison which is welcomed. The relationship between Hector and Jamal is more off and on again like a light a switch. Still, an enjoyable read.

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Jace is my Ace

I do enjoy the plot of this book. I like how you constructed the magic systems and how each place has it's own looks and such. The only problem would be Skye because early on she irritated me. However, when she's with Jace they balance each other out very well. I would recommend this book to persons who would like a good ol' fashion fantasy novel. It has nice lore and interesting supporting characters.

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