Mr. Writer

Real life

I loved how different this was.
I loved the reality, the hunourn So many things and situations thst I recognised from my long life.
Well done, Ill be following youe exploits

Very good

I enjoyed the very descriptive writing in this excerpt. I would like to be able to write as descriptively as the author.
I hope to read a lot more from this author.

Excellent

Loved what I have read. As a writer if erotic fuction myself I am always intrigued to see how others approach it. And this approach was excellent.
Well done

Very good

I enjoyed this very much. An interesting writing style but it works very well. I will read more of your work.
Thank you

Emotional

That this story is based on real events is important, and based on that, I loved it.
The story is one that would make a really good full-length novel, fictionalised, it would be able to get the message behind this story of this young woman's struggle to get to where she wants to go.

It would be easy to criticise the grammar, punctuation, and structure. But I assume that English is not this Author's first language, so, on the assumption that if I were to write in another language, then my grammar, and sentence construction would be awful. And besides, I never criticise the technical aspect of writing, as I am so bad at it myself.
Overall, I enjoyed this read, and I think, with maybe the help of someone with more experience, together they could turn this into a great book.

Loved it

Great plot and character development.
I really like the writers style, and I look forwards to reading more from them.
Keep it up.

Hot!

Wow!
Short, but very hot.
I like your style and look forward to more from you.

Fantastic

I know that I'm a fan of your work., but this story was great.
It was not predictable and had many turns and kept me on edge.
I would recommend this to anyone.

Enjoyable read

A very different type of story for me.
I enjoed it very much, with good characters and a lovely flow, for a short story.
Well done

Like it

I liked it. Cleverly written, humourous and sweet with the right amount of sexiness.
How did she cut her arm?
Nice job

Im a fan

Loved it!
I really like the characters and your excellent descriptions of the scenes.
I am impressed as a reader, and as a writer.
Thank you.

A Great Read

A great collection of shorts. Loved them all, good settings, nicely described action. Nicecandquick.
Well done

Loved it

I enjoyed this very much. I love your writing, your descriptions and all the detail that you put in.
I liked the concept too,, I like how your mind works.
Keep it up Cade

Loved it:

Lovely last page
Nice way to wrap it up. I love your writing

Excellent

This is poetry I get.
It is well written and I felt every word.
I recognised so much as the father of an asthma sufferer. Lovely. Need more

Very hot!

Excellent start to this story. Good build up, great characters and the promise of some exciting action to come.
It has a nice tempo, not too fast, I like ut.
I want more.

Loved it!

I really enjoyed this.
Excellent descriptions, good detailed scenes, and a great end to it.
Will be reading more if your work.

Good start

I'm not a big reader of this genre, but I do try to push myself. I kiked what the author has done is far.
I like the good descriptive scenes, something that I'm really interested in. Some tweaks in grammar and construction needed, but there are better people than mecthat can help with that.
Overall, nice start.

Sucked in

I'm a sucker for good descriptive text, and this had me hooked early.
Good plot, nicely erotic, I enjoyed it very much.

Very good

Out of my normal reading comfort zone but I have enjoyed it so far.
I like the author's style, I'm getting to know the characters and I'd like to see the plot developed more.
Good work
👍

Loved it!

Loved it!!!
Can't say how much I loved this.
Definitely not my usual read, horror, not my thing, but this was awesome.
Loved your style, and your humour, I can't wait for more!
❤

Excellent

I'm not often impressed by poetry. I often don't get a lot of it.
But this impressed me, a lot.
Beautiful words from one so young.
Keep going.

Interesting start

Has the potential to go in many directions, but I like how it is starting.

Loved it!

Really enjoyed reading this book. I loved the writing style, the storyline and the excellent erotic sex scenes.
Great read!

Very Promising

This has the makings of a nice story. It would be nice to see a re-write to lengthen it and fill out the characters and the story-line.

I never bang on about grammar and spelling. I'm as bad as anyone for that. I use Grammarly - give it a try. It's not perfect but quite easy to use.
Keep writing

Love it !

I love poetry like this.
Real. Lots of this seemed to be my feelings, past and present.
Keep it up

Very Good

I liked this very much.
I enjoy reading your work. Thank you and keep it up

Good Start

Great start. Like the setup and I'm looking forward to the updates.

Interesting

So far away from my normal reading material, but I enjoyed it very much.
I look forward to seeing the next chapters

Great start

I like your style.
Good descriptive sex scenes, just the sort that I like.
Keep it up

Hot

Excellent.
I really enjoyed reading this story, and feel thus it is one that coukd continue as she explores where he will take her.
Thank you

I like it!

This is so not my usual genre.
But I really enjoyed it. And I really like your writing style. Very good descriptive passages, I do like how you write.

Grammar, punctuation and spelling are important. However I leave that to others. For a first story I was interested in the story itself and your style, and I liked both.

Keep it up.

Loved it!

Great stories.
My kind of erotica!

Great writing

This us just my kind if novel. I love the concept, I write in a similar style. I loved it.
Thank you

Enjoyable

Nicely written. Good descriptive sex scenes. Thank you