Mr. Writer

Newcastle

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Real life

I loved how different this was.
I loved the reality, the hunourn So many things and situations thst I recognised from my long life.
Well done, Ill be following youe exploits

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Very good

I enjoyed the very descriptive writing in this excerpt. I would like to be able to write as descriptively as the author.
I hope to read a lot more from this author.

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Very good

I enjoyed this very much. An interesting writing style but it works very well. I will read more of your work.
Thank you

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Like it

I liked it. Cleverly written, humourous and sweet with the right amount of sexiness.
How did she cut her arm?
Nice job

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Im a fan

Loved it!
I really like the characters and your excellent descriptions of the scenes.
I am impressed as a reader, and as a writer.
Thank you.

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A Great Read

A great collection of shorts. Loved them all, good settings, nicely described action. Nicecandquick.
Well done

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Enjoyable

I enjoyed this read very much. I liked the characters and look forward to seeing how they develop.

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Loved it

I enjoyed this very much. I love your writing, your descriptions and all the detail that you put in.
I liked the concept too,, I like how your mind works.
Keep it up Cade

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Great

I really enjoyed reading this story.
I liked the style, so different to my own, nice short chapters and good descriptive sex scenes.
A very hot read

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Loved it:

Lovely last page
Nice way to wrap it up. I love your writing

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Excellent

This is poetry I get.
It is well written and I felt every word.
I recognised so much as the father of an asthma sufferer. Lovely. Need more

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Excellent

I really liked it and it left me wanting more.
Like the central character and love little TK.
Look forward to updates

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Very hot!

Excellent start to this story. Good build up, great characters and the promise of some exciting action to come.
It has a nice tempo, not too fast, I like ut.
I want more.

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Loved it!

I really enjoyed this.
Excellent descriptions, good detailed scenes, and a great end to it.
Will be reading more if your work.

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Good start

I'm not a big reader of this genre, but I do try to push myself. I kiked what the author has done is far.
I like the good descriptive scenes, something that I'm really interested in. Some tweaks in grammar and construction needed, but there are better people than mecthat can help with that.
Overall, nice start.

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Sucked in

I'm a sucker for good descriptive text, and this had me hooked early.
Good plot, nicely erotic, I enjoyed it very much.

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Loved it

Loved the style of writing. I love good descriptive text, and this was very good.
Great characters and the storyline kept me reading, despite it not being one of my favourite subject areas.
Thank you

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Very good

Out of my normal reading comfort zone but I have enjoyed it so far.
I like the author's style, I'm getting to know the characters and I'd like to see the plot developed more.
Good work
👍

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Loved it!

Loved it!!!
Can't say how much I loved this.
Definitely not my usual read, horror, not my thing, but this was awesome.
Loved your style, and your humour, I can't wait for more!

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Excellent

I'm not often impressed by poetry. I often don't get a lot of it.
But this impressed me, a lot.
Beautiful words from one so young.
Keep going.

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Interesting start

Has the potential to go in many directions, but I like how it is starting.

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Loved it!

Really enjoyed reading this book. I loved the writing style, the storyline and the excellent erotic sex scenes.
Great read!

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Loved it

This is why I love Inkitt.
I love this style, so different from what I am able to do.
I hope to read more from this author

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Very Promising

This has the makings of a nice story. It would be nice to see a re-write to lengthen it and fill out the characters and the story-line.

I never bang on about grammar and spelling. I'm as bad as anyone for that. I use Grammarly - give it a try. It's not perfect but quite easy to use.
Keep writing

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Wow

That was a great opener.
Definitely my kind if reading.
Love your writing style.
Thank you

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Love it !

I love poetry like this.
Real. Lots of this seemed to be my feelings, past and present.
Keep it up

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Very Good

I liked this very much.
I enjoy reading your work. Thank you and keep it up

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Good Start

Great start. Like the setup and I'm looking forward to the updates.

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Interesting

So far away from my normal reading material, but I enjoyed it very much.
I look forward to seeing the next chapters

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Great start

I like your style.
Good descriptive sex scenes, just the sort that I like.
Keep it up

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Hot

Excellent.
I really enjoyed reading this story, and feel thus it is one that coukd continue as she explores where he will take her.
Thank you

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I like it!

This is so not my usual genre.
But I really enjoyed it. And I really like your writing style. Very good descriptive passages, I do like how you write.

Grammar, punctuation and spelling are important. However I leave that to others. For a first story I was interested in the story itself and your style, and I liked both.

Keep it up.

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Loved it!

Great stories.
My kind of erotica!

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Excellent

Excellent collection. Very erotic and arousing. Good variety. 5*

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Good and tense.

Okay. First thing it say is that. I enjoyed it.
It isnt my normal genre but I found the story drew me in and kept me interested.
Yes there were issues, but I'm guessing that most if them are due to English not being the author's first language.
That aside Im never one to judge a book on the technical issues. If the story grabs me then thats good enough for me.
Keep writing.

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Great writing

This us just my kind if novel. I love the concept, I write in a similar style. I loved it.
Thank you

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Very good prose. Im not a poet, I have tried but I dont have the imagination.

Loved the book.
Look forward to reading more.

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Emotional

I enjoyed reading the poems. I found them very moving. Im guessing the first language is not English, but that said very good.

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Enjoyable

Nicely written. Good descriptive sex scenes. Thank you

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Very good

An interesting approach. I enjoyed the stories. Very arousing and good storylines.
I love thus site, letting me see so many different approaches

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