Mr. Writer

Newcastle

I am so grateful that people take the time to read my work. I love to read the comments from my readers. Please keep reading, keep commenting, telling me what you like, and what you don't.

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Very good

I enjoyed the very descriptive writing in this excerpt. I would like to be able to write as descriptively as the author.
I hope to read a lot more from this author.

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Enjoyable

A great way to spend an evening. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Voyeurism is something that I had planned to explore, but the way that it was done her was so good!
Well done.

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Great start

Not the sort of story that I'd usually read, but that's what I like about this site.
I like the author's style and the use of good descriptive text is something that I need to work on.
I will look forward to the updates.
Thank you

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Excellent

Loved what I have read. As a writer if erotic fuction myself I am always intrigued to see how others approach it. And this approach was excellent.
Well done

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Very good

I enjoyed this very much. An interesting writing style but it works very well. I will read more of your work.
Thank you

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Interesting start

Has the potential to go in many directions, but I like how it is starting.

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Loved it!

Really enjoyed reading this book. I loved the writing style, the storyline and the excellent erotic sex scenes.
Great read!

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Loved it

This is why I love Inkitt.
I love this style, so different from what I am able to do.
I hope to read more from this author

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Very Promising

This has the makings of a nice story. It would be nice to see a re-write to lengthen it and fill out the characters and the story-line.

I never bang on about grammar and spelling. I'm as bad as anyone for that. I use Grammarly - give it a try. It's not perfect but quite easy to use.
Keep writing

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Wow

That was a great opener.
Definitely my kind if reading.
Love your writing style.
Thank you

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Love it !

I love poetry like this.
Real. Lots of this seemed to be my feelings, past and present.
Keep it up

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Fantastic

This is the best selection of poetry that I've read on here.
I understood every word and every feeling.
I loved it.
More please

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Very Good

I liked this very much.
I enjoy reading your work. Thank you and keep it up

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Good Start

Great start. Like the setup and I'm looking forward to the updates.

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Interesting

So far away from my normal reading material, but I enjoyed it very much.
I look forward to seeing the next chapters

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Great start

I like your style.
Good descriptive sex scenes, just the sort that I like.
Keep it up

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Hot

Excellent.
I really enjoyed reading this story, and feel thus it is one that coukd continue as she explores where he will take her.
Thank you

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Interestingly good

Im always confused about characters like Rose. But I started to understand her as I read on.
I enjoyed the story and liked the writing style, which I am always comparing myself tom
Well done.

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I like it!

This is so not my usual genre.
But I really enjoyed it. And I really like your writing style. Very good descriptive passages, I do like how you write.

Grammar, punctuation and spelling are important. However I leave that to others. For a first story I was interested in the story itself and your style, and I liked both.

Keep it up.

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Loved it!

Great stories.
My kind of erotica!

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Excellent

Excellent collection. Very erotic and arousing. Good variety. 5*

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Good and tense.

Okay. First thing it say is that. I enjoyed it.
It isnt my normal genre but I found the story drew me in and kept me interested.
Yes there were issues, but I'm guessing that most if them are due to English not being the author's first language.
That aside Im never one to judge a book on the technical issues. If the story grabs me then thats good enough for me.
Keep writing.

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Great writing

This us just my kind if novel. I love the concept, I write in a similar style. I loved it.
Thank you

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Very good prose. Im not a poet, I have tried but I dont have the imagination.

Loved the book.
Look forward to reading more.

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Emotional

I enjoyed reading the poems. I found them very moving. Im guessing the first language is not English, but that said very good.

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Enjoyable

Nicely written. Good descriptive sex scenes. Thank you

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Very good

An interesting approach. I enjoyed the stories. Very arousing and good storylines.
I love thus site, letting me see so many different approaches

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