Sweety M.

India

Hi! I'm a 16yrs old aspiring author. Murderous Secrets is the only published story so far which is a work in progress. I'll try to update it regularly, so... keep tabs! Wattpad - @Myra_Parker

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Loved it from the beginning!!

I really loved the plot! A great start. I loved the way you described everything, about your character, about your sister, about Noah. I could really connect myself with the story, like I was drifting with the flow. So great work so far!
Some minor suggestions or advice would be that there were some places where some punctuation marks were missing. So, try to avoid those mistakes. I myself make grammatical mistakes but, we learn from our mistakes after all. So, continue to impress.
Waiting for the next chapter with anticipation!

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Murderous Secrets

A request for all of my readers:-
Please don't provide any spoiler in the review. Spoilers are not entertained by everyone, so please think before you're writing.
Thank you.
-Sweety M.

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Exhilarating

I loved the entire storyline. The plot is too amazing to be described. Seriously! I loved the writer's skillful writing. It truly compels you to leave the reality and dive into the story. The amazing writing skills make the fantastical characters and their world more imaginable. There were some typos in some chapters, but don't worry, they seemed pretty inconsequential compared to the whole book. They don't hinder the flow.

I loved it from the beginning. The first chapter snatched my attention right away. The writer truly knows how to keep her readers hooked.

Fantastic story. Love it. πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Emotionally-charged package

Poetry has always been the way to express the deepest feelings in a very subtle manner. You have to let yourself sink into the words to understand the deeper meaning. It's like a puzzle which you have to brainstorm upon to find the meaning. And that's the reason why I love reading poems.

This is a great book. I loved all the poems, especially Broken Heart, Heart Break, Never Give Up and Good Bye Old Friend. The rhyming scheme was excellent. The writer was able to channel his feelings into his words and that's what made this a great piece of work.

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'Game Changer'

As before, the writer kept the audience hooked till the end. The plot was really nice. The flawless description of the society at that period of time made the story more lively. It was a good surprise to see Elizabeth's mother stuck with her in the book. This made the audience believe that Elizabeth didn't just got transported into some other time period, like 'poof'. This was happening and only her astral form was transported. This makes it more interesting to read.

Truly done a great job.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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'Cinematic'

What I can say is that it was a very good idea... to explain all the happenings from a different perspective. I really loved the idea of Lydia explaining everything that has happened yet. Although, if there would've been a book based on Carter's POV, then it would've been more exciting as I, personally, felt more attached with Carter's character.

The last two chapters truly have me a heartache. The writer amazingly described everything Lydia was suffering at that point. That description, even though was brutal to read, truly was the symbol of the writer's skills. She did an amazing job.

Thumbs up!!πŸ˜„

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I went complete 'bonkers' after reading this!!

It is a heartbreaking truth that Pirates series has come to an end. A very beautifully described piece of writing. I guess it was yesterday that I had started reading the first book of the Pirates series and it was my sudden obsession that made me kept going. I was truly and completely amazed or moved by the writer's talent and creativity. Chapter 30, for me, was both heartbreaking and heart-touching and the epilogue... I guess I am at a loss of words. This series truly left me in awe. It was ridiculously AWESOME!!!!😍

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'Edge of the seat' experience!!

Hats off to the nearly flawless writing! The sudden twists and turns keeps the audience completely at the edge of the seat! The further you keep reading, more you realise that whatever you've got to know till now, was just the tip of the ice and there's more, waiting for you to become nearly breathless. The writer surely did a commendable job with the writing as I was so hooked with the story that I completed this entire book in just one day! The story kept me hooked till the end. As I reached further towards the end, I was left with more excitement and amusement than before. For me, reading the whole book was a 'peeling the onion' experience. As I went on, I felt more and more sucked into the story... as if I started living it!

I guess there were only two to three mistakes, which I was sure enough, were typos. The nearly perfect writing and describing skills of the writer compelled me to believe that those were nothing but typos.

What I can say with surety is that this story has kept me hooked enough to continue reading and has entertained me enough to recommend this to others. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Hats off!!

I completely loved the story. The plot was ridiculously awesome. I was truly moved by it. I fell in love with the book from the beginning. I was able to connect myself with the protagonist... I guess that's what had the story convincing and approachable. I loved all the characters. Great job done with the plot. I loved everything. I mean... what's there not to like? 😊

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Nice!

The story was good. The idea was very nice. I liked it how you described about the characters and the kingdoms. Surely done a commendable job.

I liked the plot, however there were some places where I was completely confused or I was unable to understand what was happening. Sometimes the story was narrated in first person and then in third person. Then there was this discontinuation of the tense in the story. It was in the past tense but then, present tense. Then I saw that more than three dots were used to indicate a pause. '...' is used to indicate a pause. Usage of more than three dots is quite excessive. So be careful about these things next time.

I know that my suggestions might appear rather blunt but I only mean good. I made these kind of mistakes too in my book and I got these kind of comments.

So I hope you find this helpful... I also hope that you understand why I'm telling this.

Waiting for the next chapter.✌

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