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CUTE!

Such a cute romantic story! Romance isn't usually my style but some how you made it work for me!

Keep it up!

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The Girl and The Player

I'm sorry but this book lacked interest for me as a reader and a fellow writer. Yes, I will admit I am more of a fantasy reader but I think all genres have the potential to be great and have their own way of adding spice to the pot. Writing is like cooking and you have to do the best with the ingredients you have. As you become more experienced, your dishes will become more complex and flavorful with the abundant amount of ingredients you have and the skills you use to make those recipes.

In my opinion, you stroy just stated facts, there was no real storyline for me personally. You fell short in detail along with descriptions of settings and people. No to mention the grammar was off but Grammarly can help you out with that or just prove read and ask a friend. The "Third POV" could have added so much to this and made it more interesting but the delivery of that just wasn't there along with grammar but props for the spelling!

I can tell you grammar is a pain to get right. Hell, I still have issues with it myself.

But don't let what I say define you as a writer, you just have to work harder and I believe you can come back from this, I don't say it to rude or put you down but I say it as a way to wish for your improvement.

Not all feedback is good feedback. Not every review will put a smile on your face. I'm not here to discourage you or shame you. I want you to be better and I know you can make your dreams reality.

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Good

This story is sweet, simple and to the point in my opinion. I would use more details and paragraphs in the story but over all this is good work!

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Chapter 2? Please?

I can't help but feel a little envious of your novel so far as I am too a werewolf writer. Your story is so smooth and constantly alluring I honestly can't get enough. This is amazing and you have a talent for writing fantasy. I have to be wary of you because I can see your gonna make it big. The details and grammar are shell shocking and are amazing, not to mention the characters are decently described.

KEEP WRITING! YOUR GOING TO DO GREAT THINGS!

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Did someone say devil?

You have a unique little story here and it's honestly not that bad at all. I wished the characters were a little more developed with their emotions and have more details on there personality. Now I didnt read the full story but I'm not gonna lie, the drinking blood part was more of a vampire book than anything and the cross-reference doesn't seem that appealing. Like for demons to drink blood I can vibe with it but when I think the devil I think of burning to death. Not Edward trying get a sip of Bellas blood lol. But that's just my opinion, also I say this a lot but don't rush your story, give it time to boil and cook. Let the juice and flavor simmer, that's one of many recipes to a great story!

You have so much potential as a writer and I can't wait to see what you accomplished with your work!

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A True Gut Buster!

I don't know if you intended this but your story really made me bust a lung a few times. I enjoy the characters and your grammar as far as I can tell is spot on! But note to self you write to fast and don't give a lot of details. This story has a lot of promise and I can see if you work hard at it, it will be a truly amazing story!

Slow down, added detail and please tell me how sexy they prince is lol!

There is honesty is no rush, one chapter at a time.

I cant wait to see how you're going to improve as an author

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Nice

Over the story was good just try to make it more detailed and give more information of the story. But i love the story, and the story it has to tell but you could use more work or building up the story and feelings and emotion wise

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Sweet

A cute little story, I enjoyed the chapters I partook in. Work on establishing detail and motive. You story had a great start but it feel through and I lost the spark that pulled me into the book. Keep the flavors simmering and this book will be great I promise you.

Work hard and be dedicated to your story

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Show me a Baddass

You want the girl to be a badass, then show me what makes her a badass. Make me understand why she is the way she is. Not to mention you don't have to describe everything at one time don't rush, the story isn't going anywhere girly. Also, not every sentence has to be a paragraph and the spacings are long and uncalled for in my opinion.

But other than that this story has a mild flavor for me, I want you to turn up the spice I wanna feel the heat.

But overall this has potential.

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Marvelously Delicious πŸ˜‹

Wow, wow, and wow! This book is a ironic blend of fantasy and fiction! I have read a lot of devils novels, stories and folklore along with their encounters, but it lacked the resolve and favor I was looking for, it didn't settle well and was majorly rushed. They didnt season the chicken, and baked it for half its time.

But you... oh God the flavor in this story was immaculent, and jucy! Writting is like a recipe and you clearly made a dish of writing so worth while and entertaining! You story is flourished with so many spices and fruits all cooked to perfection!

I envy you, your creativity for writing is amazing not to mention your writing style is well balanced.

You honestly deserve a metal for bringing back flavor into the devil writing world! I started to give up on devil novels until this story. You have truly opened up my world and I hope you continue to do so in the future.

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Tribes at its best

WOW WOW, oh and also WOW. I honestly don't know what to make of you book, it said its a drama but I never read a drama story like this before. Its so captivating and primal it pulls you in and never let's go.

You writing style is simple yeah it gives loads of information at one time, its a true work of art.

I hope this gets published one day!

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Imaginary Friend

All I have to say is wow, I don't have many words for this story.

It's really good!

I do want to see more detail describing Sally and Tyler but other than that this is such an adorable story! Not to mention kinda sad, but the sadness and mystery make it all the while of reading. So many questions pop in my head and I'm dying to know the conclusion! Please keep writing you have a great story in your position, use it to the best of your ability!

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Did someone say Playboy?

It was such a cute story I really enjoyed it and I hope you write more on this! Not to mention it's a gut buster, also saying I wouldnt mind if Xavier rearranged mine πŸ˜…

Aside from that I love it.

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Well I be dammed, SO COOL!

Your grammar and writing skills are awesome and I love the literally devices you use when writing! The story is so eye-catching and alluring I couldn't help but read more. Now somethings are not described to the fullest extent which kind of made the first chapter a little confusing but overall I really liked it.

Don't be afraid to add more detail when writing!

I hope you keep writing and achieve your dreams

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Broken Princess

The general idea and motivation you have for this story is astonishing and I like the way you use and describe your characters. It just goes to show how much of an amazing writer you will be and the mass amount of potential you have. I am already very fond of this story and I wish to continue reading it, even though it is not things I usually read. I wish your story the best of luck this world has to offer! Continue writing I would love to see your books published one of these days.

Best of luck!

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The chosen one

They characters in the story are cool and it bring a different type of illustration to the the world! This book is most likely one of the most interesting books I have ever had a pleasure of reading.

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