Ouryoaie

Hi, I'm Lamee. Apart from the fact that I'm an otaku, I love reading (obviously) and I write in almost every genre. I look forward to sharing my work and discovering new ones on this platform.

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The story is nice and good but the main character seems passive. I understand some women get raped and all, but she keeps entering situations like that and she's kind of a pushover, this can make her unlikable.
The story on it's own is nice, though.
With grammar, I noticed a shift in the use of your tenses.

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Nicely Written

I love the plot and the story line. It's very good and has a solid foundation. Though, throughout the story there was a lot of telling instead of letting the reader experience what was happening around the character (the show and not tell rule). Your grammar was awesome but some paragraphs especially dialogues started with small letters and I'm sure some editing can correct the use of punctuation.
Regardless of these, the story is a very good one and I look forward to seeing her relationship with Alexander grow and blossom.

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Touching

This really got to me and I can't help but agree that this happens everywhere. The ones who are supposed to uphold justice are the ones misusing it; especially for their gain.

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Very Good

I loved the fact that the story was well written and very engaging as it hooked me right from the first chapter or the introduction, rather. The description was good and I couldn't really find anything wrong with this book. It makes up for a very good read.

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Editing

I wanted to enjoy the book but the immense number of grammatical errors especially with your spelling, punctuation marks and choice of words kept distracting me from the main story itself.
There were a lot of words used in the wrong context and there was a large issue of telling instead of allowing the reader to experience what was happening in the story or to connect to the reader.
I suggest editing your work so readers will be able to focus on the story itself instead of the grammatical errors.

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Damaged Beyond Repair

It has been a while since I've read this work and it was on wattpad. Regardless, this was a beautiful work of art and the plot flowed, and I loved the fact that the characters were realistic. This is a very beautiful work that can have a reader searching for the author's other works to read. This is a well thought out work and was well planned.

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Scorned Love

I was doubting this work at first but as I kept reading, I immensely enjoyed the story and I kept reading to see what would become of the main character. The one thing I feel that stands out in this book is the well written plot and the beautiful storyline. It is beautiful enough to hook readers.

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Undercover

I love the concept of the story and disregarding the grammar and all, the book was written pretty well and it hooked me right from the first chapter. I couldn't stop reading and it is a beautiful work of art. The description was just right and the characters were very realistic and that is something I really appreciate. I was able to relate with them and to feel their joy and sadness together.
This is a book I'll keep reading till the end.

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