Painterof_words

I am an amatuer writer. Exploring my story telling skills. Updates every Wednesday and Sunday!

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So far so good

Hi...Since this is the beginning, you are building up the story . So, the plot is still pretty much unknown to me. I would like to read more, to know what happens next.
So far, so good!
Good work!
Building up the plot is itself a talent, and you are doing quiet well.
Good luck!

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Promise is a good plot

Hey! I'm anticipating a great story ahead. The characters are all lovely. But this all seems to be the calm before the storms. Good work here. I am, kind of, waiting for the further story with lot of interests. Good work!

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Interesting

The plot is interesting. You made me sympathize with Aiden and hate Ash as well as Richard. I want to know what happens next.
Also how could I forget the parental issues... a unique plot! Loved it so far!

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Loved it

Wow! I am new to Scifi and truly your book has captured my attention. I loved the flow of the book. The names of the characters and how humans are evil. I totally loved it!

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Incredible

Incredible style of writing...it does make you shiver! Overall, a read recommended.

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Intriguing

You have a flow with the words. Connects me to the book. The plot is interesting and has me waiting for the next update!

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Awesome

The flow of the book keeps you hooked up. Once you start there's no going back. The characters were adorable and well described. Loved it!

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This is wow

Hi! The plot is really good! I'm anxiously waiting for the end! Good work here!
P.S. I could really relate to Aron. He is a great character, so far.

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