PumpkinCreams_

From Mama’s trash can.

🍒Poetry- Depressed Souls. 🍒Story- Sunset Scar. Love everyone regardless. Jiggly Cheesecake Factory. They/them

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Beautiful

I love how all of these poems are unique.
It has a lot of beautiful imagery to them as well.
The grammar is perfect. The stanzas could’ve been divided into neater stanzas but overall. Beautiful!

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Scary.

So, I’m not so into horror but this gave me more hope on to reading.

The plot is outstanding, grammar on point and even the editing is beautiful.

The only problem is that the book has huge paragraphs instead of small ones. This can create confusions amongst readers. But overall great book.

P.S for author

I’ve read around half of it before, I just didn’t get time to review it. Sorry for the late review but kudos for you!

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Try it!

The thrill of this book is very interesting. I do recommend this to anyone who’ll come across me.

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Nice!

Please keep writing more!
I am captivated by this!
I really do recommend this to anyone!

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WTF!

Why did you do this?!
This was just unpredictable.
Amazing.
Keep up the great work!

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Good job!

There’s a few grammar issues but you’ll get it done in a round of editing. Overall, I freaking enjoyed this.
Keep up the great work!

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Lovely!

Keep up the great work hun!
I’ve read another book of yours and it’s beautiful

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Nice!

I have not read nothing like this before. It’s awesome.
I definitely do recommend this to a lot of people!

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Capturing

I love the plot of this. Even thought I have read a lot of stuff with the same plot and genre, this book has captured my attention. Can’t wait to read more!

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Beautiful

Everything is on point. I just wish that this author would write more. This book contains raw emotions which I really love. I hope to see this author move further. Beautiful!

Love, PumpkinCreams 🧡🧡

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Understanding.

I love everything about this book. The fact that this author had the courage to even start the collection, is a sign of great strength. It’s perfect for teenagers and young readers too. You might want to put up a content warning heads up on each poem regarding self harm, eds, death and other things too. The smallest of all.
Great job author. Keep going. Love your works.

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Suspenseful

I loved this book overall. The main thing about this is that it is written in the killer’s perspective, that was a unique touch. I’m not so into thriller but I really did enjoy this book. I recommend everyone this. I was kinda shocked at the fate of the character tho🥲🥲🥲

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Depression in simple yet meaningful words.

Now, all of the poems speak one thing in general: Depression.
Something we all are afraid to open up about but know it all too well, sometimes.
I’m proud of this author to even start this.
The only thing I had a problem with was the punctuations. The commas were missing, that’s all.
The poem has meaningful phrases but it’s simple. Easy for young or new readers to understand.
I really recommend this book for anyone struggling with depression and self hate.
You’re not alone and, author, you’re amazing!
Pls do write more!

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Beautiful

I love all the poems in this.
Everything is so meaningful too.
Great job author.

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Bless you.

It’s a beautiful masterpiece of a young mind. Surely will recommend this for young readers.

Mashallah you’ll get where you want to go to.

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So far so good.

I have read just a few of these but I’m already hooked on it.
I really love the plot of this book too. The writing style is really good but I would expect for more depth. (If that even makes sense 😅) but anyhow, I love the first few chapters. I have already read close to three chapters.

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Lovely.

The writing skills are on point, I haven’t read the entire thing but I’m really impressed by far.
The plot is amazing too. Keep up the good work.

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Great book.

Apart from the spacing, I loved and enjoyed the book. I am fast reader that’s why I have trouble with the spaces. Some rounds of editing and you’re done.

Fighting!✊💜

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Heartbreaking but serene.

Let me clarify.

🧡There’s some grammatical mistakes but you’ll get it done through editing.
🧡The meaning is not deviated off the lines.
🧡The poet can bring about the emotions in the readers.
🧡The depth of the poems are shallow enough for everyone, irrespective of their experience in reading poem, understand.
🧡I would love if the poet had some good recovery poems.

Overall, the poems are awesome. Pls do promote this. You deserve at least 15 likes on this. Come on.

Love, PumpkinCreams 🧡🧡

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So far ok.

I love the way you took the flow of the book. The plot seems unique and I’ve never dad anything it. I recommend that you use the plot and add more to it.

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I love it

It’s really awesome and all of the poems have really good meaning behind each.

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Editing is required but you’re on the right track.

I love how you creative are. Now, this needs editing and before we put out our works, we have to be really careful. Then again, we may leave a few commas here and there. I am hoping for a whole book soon.💜💜💜

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Great potential but need some editing.

The book has very good potential to it. There’s almost nothing wrong with the plot.
The thing here is the commas and apostrophes for me. You need some editing and your off to go.
I’m not going to demotivate you by being too harsh. I’m not trying to sugar coat.
This book has great potential but needs some editing for the punctuations.
I really hope you make it far ahead in life author! 💜💜💜💜

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Realistic

The poet really writes poems that mean a lot.
She not only puts out deep, dark thoughts but actually is able to make the reader feel it.
I just love this book.
I hope a lot more people can see this divine masterpiece 💜💜💜

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Beautifully written

Now, I’m not someone who would do vampires but I’ll say that this book has me hooked. I may have read just the few pages but it’s amazing. Hoping to find more works from you💜💜💜💜

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Oops

At first, I was like”EROTICA? Hmm idk about this…”

Then I read it and I loved it. Keep up the great work hun💜💜💜👏👏

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Must try

I like how you decided to put the plot. The girl is really innocent and then we have this really mean and complete opposite man. I can’t wait till they clash like hell. There’s no grammar mistake too and that’s a bonus. Keep writing more!!!!!!
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