RASmith

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Spring in my Heart

I am so pleased to find another posting from you, as your writing lightens my heart and I find a warmth there, I love the words and meaning which they have and as expressed from your heart. Please never stop writing.as it brightens my days.

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Good Reads

The plot was enjoyable and your unique style of writing has great potential, this is to be encouraged and I truly feel the future could open some great possibilities for you, we all learn and adapt as we become older and find different ways of expressing what is in our hearts, I am still learning and always will, I would however encourage you to let your heart guide you in developing such novels, Remember to edit the novel and if you can edit a second time, who nows you could be famous one day. Please never stop writing as it would be such a great loss to the future.

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Room to improve

The story has great potential and if edited and expanded I believe this could develop into an enjoyable novel. You will need to edit and then re-edit as there are typing errors, and the story needs to be built upon. The Plot is a bit disjointed and requires rethinking, that said for a First Draft this has great potential and could develop into a great read. Please keep writing.

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Great Reads

Your thoughts flowed as i viewed this script, my heart reached out and enjoyed the way you expressed these words, painting pictures in my mind, A truly good read, you could go far and I know I shall follow your work. Please never stop writing you have so much to offer. A great Read.

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Great Read

You have a wonderful story building and have a gift in holding your readers in expectation, I would so much enjoy to discover how this novel progresses and encourage you to never stop writing as your story has great potential as do you as a writer.

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From the Heart

You have a wonderful gift which brought your words to life within my imagination. Please never stop writing.

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Peace and Joy

As I read those words my mind drifted to such times I myself have found the inner peace, the love and joy experienced from been in my Lords presence. You have a wonderful heart and skill in expressing your feelings. Thank you those words made me smile and brought memories of wonderful times.

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Great Reads

I found the plot incredibly interesting and feel this could develop into a great novel, the characters have life and come across positively, please can I ask for you to write more?

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Great Reads

I have to visit Amazon now and find your book, I loved the plot and your style of writing, please keep writing it makes the world a better place.

Purchased the paperback version this evening, I also love the book cover, I shall enjoy the read.

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sensually pleasing

A style I have not read before, that said, it was wonderful and held my imagination to the end, please write more.

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Great Reads

You have a wonderful talent in building and bringing to life the words which you write. The plot caught my interest and the characters came alive, a few mistakes but heck I make them all the time, yet I acknowledge I am still learning and have caught a glimpse of your mind and truly desire too learn more. Please never stop writing, it would so sad as your imagination is wonderful.

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Dancing in a dream

I love dance, all types and I feel from your writing and expressing such words that it has caught your interest, you brought across the love and deep commitment with regards the teacher, I would have loved to have seen even more, keep writing it brightens our days and in my mind I think of dancing.

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passion

I wanted to read so much more as you have such a beautiful gift, the few words written could stir the heart as I also love long walks by the sea and to hear the sound of the waves crashing against the sand and of birds singing. Open your heart, close your eyes and listen to the voice within, and then write what you see in your mind. Please, please keep writing.

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Love is in the air

Wow, so much passion expressed so beautifully and leading the reader through a painting of dreams from tragic loss to reunion and never ending love. You have so much to give the world, it made me feel happy and pleased to have read your story. keep writing it brightens the day.

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Love in the Heart

I can feel from the story a love reaching out and wanting to be heard, it was romantic and made me smile wishing in part life could always be that way. You have a wonderful talent and a beautiful way of expressing the feelings in your heart, keep reaching for the stars and never stop writing it brings pleasure to so many myself included..

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Full of Promise

To my mind your short introduction offers great promise and has the potential to bring alive a wonderful read, I noticed some errors and it would enable the story to flow if these were to be corrected, that said I shall seek out your novel and have a read. Keep writing and bring your thoughts and words to life.

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Bringer of Light

I truly enjoyed the few words which you wrote, I feel you have so much more to express and could build beautiful images with your words. Possibly expand and open your heart some more. I certainly for one would love to read more, keep writing and let your light shine.

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