R Allen Lancaster

SWOntario

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Nicely done

The story delivered more than I was expecting, thank you ... With an edit or two this story could be polished enough to consider publishing

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the Money Masquerade

Aug 31 2020 though the story is incomplete the CIA may not want you to read it. Hah ... A complex tale with alot of truth and history revolving around a trio of seasoned women and the darkly growing computerized world ... The writters ability to paint with her words gives the tale sophistication. Without an ending one can only wonder where she's ultimately going with it. If she never finishes it I'll be left to wonder if a government agency finished her first.

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the secret door

aug.09/20 ... A multi sided story that comes together behind a secret door ... reading this felt like the writter himself was socially telling the story to me ... lots of dialog and creative ideas ... With some edits it could make for a worthy production

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Simply made for him

July 23 2020 ... A started teen romance. The writer is doing a fine job getting her thoughts out. The story itself seems fairly standard. Uncompleted I can only say so much about it

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The Descendent

July 22 2020 ... The writer certainly has a creative mind and ideas to share ... This tale is of a young girl in modern times discovering old world magic is yet finished ... I think the story has an appeal to young readers.

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The rebel gypsy

July 10 2020 ... A romantic tale for the modern day with old world thinking as a deterant to a couple being happy ... Within the story one can pick up some basic spanish ... With some polishing and completion it could easily be a published book

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An elegantly spoiled caper

July 3 2020 ... A good jewel caper with a twist that just needs a little polishing ... While reading I could see it as part of a series of heists. The extravagance of such stories always has appeal to producers.

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Interesting and kept me curious

Though not finished found it, with all the scoundrel characters to be interesting enough I could see it as a movie. ... Keep up the good work

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Secret love letters

A cute glimpse into a young woman's diary

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