SSA_WRITINGPASSION

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Nice one I must say. Although I have read only one chapter I found this one an interesting one. At the same time, I must add that adding a bit more dialogues could make it more catchy - (this word suits the best). Well adding of more dialogue thing absolutely depends on how the author wants the story to be. As soon as I complete reading it I would update my review soon too.
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