Silas Wolf

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Quite good!

This was a enjoyable story so far. Your writing style is quite simple yet descriptive enough that I can very much envision anything that's going on. Your characters are well written in a way that each character seem to have their own quirks and flaws and doesn't make them too lacking in depth and growth that some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage our emotions. There was a few spelling mistakes here and there, though wasn't major enough to distract from the story.

Overall this is a pretty good story and I would recommend this to anyone and I wish you well on your future writings.

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Good work so far!

This was a good story so far. Your writing style simple yet descriptive enough that I can very much envision anything that's going on. Your characters are well written in a way that each character seem to have their own quirks and flaws and doesn't make them too lacking in depth and growth that some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage our emotions. It makes the character interactions more immerseive. There were a few mistakes in grammar, though not to major and didn't distract me from the story.

Overall this is a pretty good story so far and I would recommend this to anyone and I wish you well on your future writings.

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Quite good!

This was a enjoyable story so far. Your writing style is quite simple yet descriptive enough that I can very much envision anything that's going on. Your characters are well written in a way that each character seem to have their own quirks and flaws and doesn't make them too lacking in depth and growth that some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage our emotions.. Any mistakes such a spelling and grammar are seen as minor and don't distract from the story.

Overall this is a pretty good story and I would recommend this to anyone and I wish you well on your future writings.

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Great potential to be a good novel!

This is a very well written/typed, piece of work. The amount of descriptive details you put in this, is really impressive. Reading though this is really immersive and it was quite difficult to find a stopping point. I can't find any faults or mistakes, as you done a thoroughly good job typing this story out. The characters are done in a good way that makes them seem like they are distant, with their own quicks and flaws. And I can't find any faults in your spelling/grammar, which I think is a wonderful thing.

Overall this is a really good fantasy and I would recommend this to anyone. Good writing/typing!

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Written really well!

This was a enjoyable story so far. Your writing style is very engaging and very descriptive enough that I can very much envision anything that's going on. Your characters are well written in a way that each character seem to have their own quirks and flaws and doesn't make them too lacking in depth and growth that some beginner writers have trouble writing characters in a way that engage our emotions. I really enjoy Erik and Caelynn's relationship and dynamics. It makes the character interactions more immerseive. I can't find any fault in your grammar and such which is a wonderful thing!

Overall this is a pretty good story and I would recommend this to anyone and I wish you well on your future writings.

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Very good story and writing!

I'm quite into the story so far. Oragon seems like a very intriguing planted and I'm very interested on wanting to know more about it. The writing style is very well written in a way that makes reading through immersive, and I thought the journal and the language it was written a very cool idea. The characters are really well written out, they seem to each have their own, quirks, flaws and such.

Overall, I like this story and I recommend this to anyone, who wants a fresh fantasy story that's quite unique in its own way.

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Good Work.

Not something I'll typically read, though what I like about this story is the amounts of details you put into this to envision everything thats going on. As for the characters, you wrote them like they each have their own quirks, flaws and personalities, like the character Rose, like damn she's such a character from chapter 1. You're writing style is quite simple to follow on and any mistakes for spelling and grammar is seen as minor and doesn't distract from the story.

Overall you done a pretty good job and I recommend this to anyone who like anything to do with vampires and such. Keep up the writing! 👍🏻

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